Tragedy Under Lunar II Starting

meh, didn't post it here, it was in my art thread:

Hey all i am doing good i am finishing Chapter 3 up i am doing great people
@Jerre Give me some more time and ill do em
@Azn I luv that Rikku :D
@Mantis Thanks ill call you if i need something ;)
@Dark what did you wanna do? and Al Bhed are a very smart at technology from FFX and FFX-2
If Any one has any Questions just ask

I'll like to give the concept a try!!!

I can help you with triggers and i know pretty much about AL Bhed since im a huge fan of ffx

Rikku looks hot.

can you post alink to some site were they have lots of art. I dont know much about ff

Rikku is hot!

@Jerre try googleing it
@Dark show me some of your work first
and yep Rikku is hot and I am pretty sure that i am gonna finish chapter 3 today :D

heres chapter 3 people of the Reptiles, the next chapter is Parasites, and this is Draco's coloring of the Parasite's hero, original Outline, and Black and White art done by Andy


Chapter 3

Part 1
As a figure stood a reptile scout said, “Komodus where should the next group go?� than Komodus said, “How many camps are in front of the Al Bhed Main base?� Than the scout told him that they would have to go threw two small camps consisting of the Crypt Fiends. So Komodus decided to get a group of 12 Reptiles and assault the small camps. Then Komodus got his Reptiles brethren and marched off. The first camp had little to no enemies in it, so Komodus marched to the next camp with a bit more defense but they found reinforcements in the bushes waiting for them to arrive. So the Reptiles raided the next base and it was easily destroyed. So the men marched off finding that there was a lot of ruing blocking the way too the path into the Al Bhed Base. Clearing some Brush away they find a cave leading to a longer path to the Al Bhed base.

Part 2
As the Reptiles go in to the tunnel the tunnel door collapses behind them. As they continue forward the sniff the air and smell dead bodies in the area. Than seeing them that there is actually Crypt Fiends in the area and they start to attack them. Charging threw the tunnel they find that the tunnel exits out near the Al Bhed near base. After a while of traveling through the tunnel they find daylight.

Part 3
Upon exiting the cave of Crypt Fiends they found a cliff leading to the main entrance to the Al Bhed base. Upon looking around the surroundings out of the bushes Al Bhed ambushing them. Than Komodus said, “We come to talk to your leader we mean no harm.� The Al Bhed escorted them to there camp. At the Al Bhed camp the Head Master told them to go rescue a group of an Al Bhed if he wanted to get an alliance but they were in the midst of Crypt Fiend territory. So Komodus set camp up preparing to rescue the Al Bhed. Setting up he found were they were and just need an attack and get in. After an attack group has assembled made Komodus and the other reptiles attacked swiftly. As the Reptiles attacked they pierced a hole in the enemy defense they got to the Al Bhed and rescued them from danger and headed back to camp.

Part 4
Upon hearing his men were saved he made an alliance with the Reptiles. After the meeting with the Al Bhed Head master, Komodus arrived back at his camp. As Komodus was preparing another attack against the crypt fiends the Parasites started attacking the camp. As the Parasites fell from battle more and more parasites kept coming as the reptiles started to loose the battle they signaled the Al Bhed for reinforcements. After five minuets of fighting the Al Bhed drop ships flew over and dropped off a whole army of Al Bhed units and they started slaughtering the Parasites. After the Al Bhed made the Parasites flee to go regroup, The Al Bhed set up a camp next to the reptiles base to help destroy the Parasite base next to them.

Part 5
As they Al Bhed finished setting up camp a scout from the Al Bhed base saying that they will keep making attacks to destroy the parasites base and they should strike when they are attacking. So as both of the armies charge on the Parasite base, as both of the armies keep a constant pounding on the Parasites. After a while of fighting and hard work the Parasites base has fallen.

Part 6.
As Komodus finishes destroying the base he finds another weird cave behind it with some kind of ancient information on the walls. As they enter the cave Komodus touches the wall that looks like to be some panel and the cave shuts behind them. As Komodus looks at his fellow Reptile brothers he notices an eerie dead silence than there was a foot step sound as someone or something was walking than the whole tunnel started making the same sound than sounded like marching. Than Komodus ordered his men to get to the other side of the tunnel as Crypt Fiend started charging them. Slashing their way threw Crypt fiend after Crypt Fiend they have finally made it to the end of the tunnel.

Part 7
Upon leaving the tunnel he sees vast base of the parasites. Avoiding from being seen he heads back to his camp through the swamp. After arriving at the base he sent message to the Al Bhed about the massive Parasite base. Remembering some inscribing on the dark tunnel wall that every time a people has rose up against the parasites they have only prolonged the death of their race. So Komodus remembered a rumor about calling of a Dragon. So Komodus called his High Priest and asked him how to summon. Learning how to summon all that Komodus needed to do is just guard the circle after a while. But also he needed rare stones from the swamp so Komodus and a group set off to find them. His for object he needed was a tooth from a graveyard in a deep cave called the Dragon Pit, and a crystal that has great power located some where in a swamp in the ruins of the city that the parasites have destroyed. So upon entering the Dragon Pit Cave he notices that the same smell of Crypt Fiends are in the area. Running threw the cave they found a pile of dragon bones from a long time ago. Looking through the bones they found no skulls so they continued on and found a room with a skull. As Komodus removed a tooth from the skull they looked behind them to see the dragon bones we started to reanimate as the cave collapsed. Racing out of the cave slashing threw everything they made it out of the cave. Komodus taking a breath started heading to the ruins with the crystal for the summoning

Part 8
As Komodus arrived at the ruins he saw the crystal but noticed a Parasite camp around it. So Komodus set up base and prepared an attack against the Parasites. As they built camp fending off the Parasites they finally established an army and went in slashing away at the parasites after a long battle the Parasites were made to flee. Taking the Crystal Komodus heads back to the camp and brings it to his high Priest. The High Priest took both of the items and made a summoning circle.

Part 9
As the High Priest made the summoning circle out side of the base, As the High Priest Summoned the parasites started trying to kill the Priest so Komodus was setting up defenses all around the priest as he summoned the Parasites were swarming the area killing everything like the beast they are. After the lines have fallen it seemed like all hope was lost as the Parasites were almost at the High Priest was in great danger. Than the Giant Dragon Swooped down and landed next to them and started killing the Parasites the great dragon Draco has arrived. As Draco slaughtered the Parasites they had fled and were made to regroup.

Part 10
As the men were regrouping to destroy the Parasites land that have took over Reptile Territory. So the men set off with Draco and started destroying Parasites bases. It seemed that there was some sort of a cocoon like thing being moved from danger. From Base too base they chased it but after all the bases have been destroyed in the Reptile area have been destroyed. After Draco made sure the whole Reptile area was safe and secure he left back to his guardian position. So Komodus sent scouts to find the cocoon they were protecting and after a day they had no luck so Komodus started fortifying the base and made a shrine to the great Draco who helped them.

just done those two...

I am almost halfway done with Chapter Four of the Parasites
@Dark Thats good dark but thats not the kind of artistic style i was looking for

oy, you said youd give me creds for that pic, even if I didnt color it...

I dint give credit cause i thought you hated my very exsistance :(
Edit- I changed the post so it gave credit to you also

thats ok... but if u change ur mind I'm always around..

I dont hate your very existence, you were just bugging me a whole lot and I didnt wanna be mean by saying shut up so it all got pent up and I went rank at you....:P