Tragedy Under Lunar II Starting

Hey all i am starting whole new project with 4 new races featuring the Al Bhed, Crypt Fiends, Reptiles, and Parasites. The first thing i planned to do was make all the missions first than do all the MPQ work to wrap it up. I did the whole story line for the Al Bhed Race already. In the area of custom stuff, they will be the last part of the mod. I will PM the story line if you want it to you. Heres the list of what i would most likely need in the project.
1-3 - Triggers
0-3 - Skinner
0-3 - Modelers
0-3 - Terrianers
1-3 - Concept Artist
I can do the rest and yes i know i put 0 for skinners, modelers, and terrianers because they wont be needed till end of the project or i can do them.
If you need any info is needed just ask and ill tell you

Heres the story for the Al Bhed missions, excuse grammar errors,
Chapter 1
Part 1.
It was a sunny day in land of Jeva than in a swamp like area of the land a purple portal opened up and about 20 men with equipment and weapons came threw the strange portal. After the men put there stuff down the portal seemed to crash surprising the men.
One of the men in front of all the others put his stuff down and said, “Damn,� than He said, “Ok men set up camp and the transmitter so we can contact the boss.� Than all the men but a person standing behind the head master dint start working like all the rest. He said, when I said men I meant every one not just the men than the person took off her helmet revealing a familiar face with a smile on it. Than she said, “I am part of the scouting team that does the scouting.� Than the headmaster said, “Fine Rikku ill let you have a couple of men but return with something from the wild and what was out there.�
After heading out of camp Rikku and the a couple men start walking to find something to report besides just a swamp. As they tread through the swamp they find a temple that heads to under ground. She thought to her self it wouldn't be smart to go just yet. Heading back to a camp on an alternate route Rikku finds some reptile like hostile enemies. After killing them Rikku heads back to her camp to find that they have successfully installed the communication with the boss in charge of this exploration. After Rikku explained everything she saw to the headmaster and the boss. The Boss decided to send Rikku to command an army to go fight and defend the camp from reptile attacks and to grab any thing useful from the under ground ruins.

Part 2
Rikku decided to fortify the base and attack the camp next to the temple to go underground. After sending a small attack group including her self they destroyed the camp. When they attacked the camp there was a giant reptile beast that could eat men whole. The men look at each other kind of scared than they decided to kill the beast first. After Rikku's Group destroyed the camp. Rikku's Group heads back to their base to only find out a couple of scouts found out the Reptiles started to block the entrance to the under ground city.

Part 3
Rikku starts building a camp out side. Organizing the men they assault the enemy base right next to the under ground entrance. Rikku starts to think that they should sent a group to go see if the lizard men are coming from the Underground Ruins. After destroying the Enemy base out side the ruins rikku said, “Well are you ready men I have no idea what's down there but its most likely bad…� Than the Group Departed and started and left to go in side the cave.

Part 4
As the group was walking down in the cave Rikku was starting to get scared in the darkness of the cave. She said, “Come on people let's hurry up this place is creeping me out.� Than Rikku found a switch on the wall, hoping it would turn some lights on she heard a giant slam behind them, which blocked there only entrance out. Than Rikku found a room with an urn in it. The group went in to the room than Rikku went to go pick up the urn and examining it. Rikku leaving the room with it tripped over some bones dropping the urn causing it to shatter. The ashes out of it blew away with a strange gust of wind. Than the bones started to move and forming skeletons that started attacking them. Than The group finds another way to get out of the cave and start running to the next exit. Upon leaving the Underground ruins they find that the skeletons are flooding out of the under ground ruins.

Part 5
Mean while at the main base they are attacking two other Reptiles Camps out side the Main base. The head master was started to get worried about Rikku. After destroying the two bases of reptile scum the Head master went to the Under Ground Ruins and finding that the entrance was blocked off. Thinking that she would send a distress signal. Than he said, “Rikku don't get your self killed in there…�

Part 6
As rikku started to panic made a distress signal. As the Head Master herd the Distress signal he made the camp go mine trees to get a large surplus of Supplies to go help Rikku. The Head master found out that the reptiles have silos of supplies in their base that were Raid able. After the men collected all the supplies they sent the Calvary to help Rikku and her group.

Part 7

As the Crypt fiends kept coming out of the under ground ruins Rikku quickly started building a camp to defend against them. Rikku knew it would take about fifteen minuets for the rest of the main camp to send reinforcements against the crypt fiends. Then Rikku said to her men, “This may be our last moment together but we shall fight with courage!� As they fought the time passed faster than they fought. As the 15 minuets ended all seemed hopeless than the Calvary arrived and fended off the Crypt Fiend Army.

Part 8
As Rikku and her group arrived back at the main camp, Rikku met up with the headmaster and thanked him for the saving. After everyone settled down they found out a couple of men went to scout out a while back and haven't returned yet so Rikku was to go find the scout team. As rikku left with a group to find the scout team they found a mutant humanoid that was hostile. So the group killed it than one of members that did get attacked by started acted weird as he turned into a mutant like the one they just killed. They killed it with out any one being attacked than Rikku said, “Don't let them touch you!� As the team head through the Swamp they found other mutants. After killing them they found the one making the parasites it was a big beast horrible worth looking at. After killing it they had back to the camp to report that the scout team was mutated and they had to be executed.

Part 9
As the group gets back to camp the Parasite creatures have a camp out side the base. Rikku said, “I'll take it out I need to get back at them for what they have done.� After Rikku sets up her camp out side the Camp of the Parasites they attack the base. After a while of fighting they defeat the parasite's camp. Than another scout group reported that the Parasites main army has surrounded the camp.

Part 10
As Rikku Fortifies her camp she prepares for the worst from the parasites. Rikku knows this could be the end of her existence. As Rikku gets ready for the fight of her life the Parasites attacking. Than Rikku Said, “We have to last at least fifteen minuets in battle!� As the Parasites attack and they fight with no fear of the feature. Than after the fifteen minuets a huge horde of parasites starts attacking the camp taking over the whole camp.

Well The story isnt to bad, I hope the dialouage is better in the game and there is more of it. Also the timed mission stuff could be shortened down some.

Yeah theres gonna be alot more dialogue in the game dont worry about it

K that is good

Thanks Alot D :D

Nice but kind of confusing. Mind sending me the whole set of al bhed primers? you know what I mean. Remember when you're naming it to use a thesaurus.

I dint plan to use actuall Al Bhed Language in this because it would be really difficult and confusing at times and if i do use al bhed i got a translator i will give to everyone

Ok heres chapter two of the Crypt Fiends, and next chapter will be Reptiles so heres the story

Chapter 2

Part 1
As the Crypt Fiends Rebuild from after the defeat from the Al Bhed they start fortifying there base to attack a near by Reptile base. The Head Necromancer Dragoth was helping reconstruct the base. After Constructing the base and building up from some defenses they decided to attack a small reptile camp. As they attacked the camp they realized that the bones of the reptile's dead were raise able as skeleton warriors. Using the Reptile's area for their base. So Dragoth decided to send some Dark spirit scouts to go see where the closes Reptile or Al Bhed base was.
So the Dark Spirit scouts report back to tell that A Reptile Base has been spotted that has been mining that has been essential for the Reptiles supplies for them to keep attacking. So Dragoth planned and thought of a battle plan to take the big fortress and take the supplies. So Dragoth had his men start getting a lot of supplies for the attack on the fortress. As the men finished gathering they headed to the fortress for a great siege.

Part 2
As the Crypt Fiends set up their base they see messengers from the outpost from the Main mining area fortress of the Reptiles. Than a scout spotted a messenger going to the fortress from the outpost. So Dragoth sent a couple of Wraiths to go kill it. After killing the messenger, Dragoth decided to kill the out post so the fortress will be unsuspecting to their attack so they wont have time to fortify their fortress.

Part 3
Dragoth decided it was time to siege the doors of the fortress head on and destroy the palace inside and all the other buildings than establish a mining colony. As the men marched to the doors of the fortress the fortress started preparing the defenses. As the Reptiles use what little time to fortified they hoped for the best. As the Skeletons charged against the heavily fortified gates, a scout rushed over to Dragoth and said, “My lord I have found a weak spot in the wall we could rush and than open the gates from the insides.� As the men destroyed the weak spot of the wall the Crypt Fiends rushed in and attacked and opens the main a gates letting the main army of the crypt fiends in the outer walls of the fortress. Than Dragoth started planning an attack on the inner walls of fortress.


Part 4

As the army set up camp in the outer walls fending off Reptiles Dragoth Decides to move in and destroy the inner walls and the palace so he can control the Fortress and gain a big supplies for the crypt fiend army. Dragoth lined his army and charged the four guard towers enabling them to break through the main door. Than marching through the main gats he charged the palace and was able to bring it down causing the remaining reptiles to flee. After setting up camp a scout came to report that the reptiles that have escaped and reinforcements have regrouped and are planning an attack to regain the fortress. So Dragoth started fortified the fortress.

Part 5
Dragoth had sent a messenger for reinforces from another camp of Crypt Fiends and he thought it would most likely take about fifteen minuets for them to get here. So Dragoth rallied the men and tried to stand the attack of the fury of the reptiles' forces of revenge. As the Crypt Fiends fought the moment seem dimmed as the Reptiles started over rushing the fortress then Dragoth saw the reinforcements he ordered fifteen minuets ago finally arrived slashing through the reptiles saving the fortress from retake over.

Part 6
As Dragoth set up the mining colony in the fortress he decided to send a small group to explore the unexplored swamp area around the fortress. As the group traveled through the forest they find some kind of mutants that have some resemblance to the Al Bhed and the reptiles but with a different look like something had changed them. Killing them the Crypt fiends scout around in the dark part of the swamp one of them men come across an ancient slab of some kind describing a scene where monsters had killed a race. The slab described how the monsters would slaughter everything in their path but the mages of the race as a last attempt of killing the monsters had cast a spell to cripple the monsters but it wasn't enough and the race had soon vanished.

Part 7
Dragoth had read the slab and thought there must be more slabs in the swamp. So Dragoth went with the team and fighting off the mutants they found 3 more slabs. Dragoth learned from this that the monsters actually called them selves Parasites. So Dragoth decided to start an offensive against them because the stories so far are bad news for all the Crypt Fiends.

Part 8
As Dragoth explored the Crypt Fiends found a camp of the Parasites. Dragoth quickly summoned for reinforcements and set up a camp outside the Parasite camp and than after fending off the Parasites for a while they managed to get a camp up and running they were able to send an army and over run the Parasites causing them to flee in to the swamp. Than another scout came alerting Dragoth telling him that the Parasites have regrouped


Part 9
Hearing the News of them regrouping He sends word for reinforcements from about Ten minuets away, so Dragoth decided to start fending off the Parasites in the ten minuets. This battle was fierce the Parasites kept coming like they had to kill every one besides them as they were on a crusade of death. After ten minuets of blood spilled from both sides the parasites have to over ran them but than Dragoth saw the Calvary coming it slashing away pushing them back again. Dragoth just came up with a plan

Part 10
Dragoth have just set up a camp out side a Main Parasite Fortress. Dragoth plan was to sneak four mages in to the compound and have them cast an offensive spell to summon a monster to wreck havoc and destroy the enemy camp. As the Crypt Fiends break through a door and rush the enemy camp the four mages set up and will need five minuets to summon the monster. As they fend off the Parasites the Crypt Fiends end up summoning the monster, which has a great resemblance of a Dragon, comes down and starts rampaging through the parasites base. The parasites are no match for the huge monster and flee. Than Dragoth said, “Well now they know what they are dealing with!�

Alright your doing the story, but your campaign will fail because you can't do most of it (triggers, terrain) by yourself. Sorry but thats usually how it ends.

if this mod gets more progress, ill be glad to help out in modeling...im already doing your concepts, but about the modeling, you're gonna have to wait a month, ima go on vacation

I will manage I just dont roll over and die usally like majority of the people

I'll like to join this mod, but i don't got that much experience.

btw... what is Al Bhed???

hows the thing for the concept art coming along?

Shadow if you need any help just ask!