Screens from my campaign

if you want you can send me the blp you use for the wings and i can make it look better (hopefully)

No that's ok. I'm doing this project 100% solo, so I couldn't do that. :D

Double-post, but needed for a new pic...

I like the shinyness of the last one with the waterfall and the fountains, good stuff.

I gave it 7 but it could easily become a 10 with a few adjustments...
1st. The wings on the priest are way too big, size them down or make the priest bigger but they don't look right at the moment
2nd. The skinned Demon Hunter (which looks fairly good) looks a bit unrealistic, while normal gameplay won't be effected by it, the cinematics will suffer greatly
3rd. There isn't much change in the Jaina model which would be nice to see.
Apart from that its great and I'm looking forward to seeing it out, I hope it doesn't get too stuffed by TFT

That last one looks pretty wicked! The waterfall that is. The terrain on the right side is lacking.

Hmm. Ok, I didnt finish all of the terrain in that last pic yet. :D And his wings are supposed to be ultra-big casue their kinda like super-ultra powerful beings with huge wings.

I'm really busy making another map at the same time, not to mention wasting all of my time actually PLAYING TFT. This won't be finished till maybe....October?!?! Maybe earlier though.

Just a hint...
This is very Simple....
This is not complicated and will make your skins look slightly better...

Set the hardness to 10, opacity to 25...

So it doesnt look like you did it with a crayon

Good skins though, the DH one is a tad odd with crayon green skin

O and ya, run a shader across it or something if u wanna get advanced

1. Wings. They are too big. and if they are ultra powerful, why aren't they big themselves? Also, they look out-of-place, it's like someone just glued them on or something...
2. I'm getting an itch...

Ultra powerful doesn't always mean that you have to be buff and huge. I like the angel wings big, so that's how there gonna stay. Thanks for the comments though.

i noticed there is a lot of flat terrain. well, a ton of flat terrain. it would be wise to make small bumps or hills to liven the scenes up a bit, makes it more interesting. Another thing ur terrain is lacking are enviromental doodads. i noticed u used some in a couple of the screens, but they are clustered and look as though they are unnatural. My favorite all-around doodad is the shrub (ashenvale)

summary: spread out the enviromental doodads and add slopes and bumps to the flat terrain.


-s[i]n

in the first pic with orange logan, the cliff looks better then the second pic, and i think cliffs just make it look more... at least when compared to the second cliff.

Overall it looks good

All of those pics were taken before TFT so I didn't have my favorite doodad (the sunken ruins shrub )

Anywho, once I finish a little side-project map in a couple days, I'll post newer pics here.

:D

youre percentages on the poll are really off... 5/5 is like 10/10... perfect. and 1/2 being the worst? whats up w/ that?lol.

The 5/5 should be a 5/6. It's like a poll out of 10, I just screwed up.... 0_o

The 1-2 means about 1/10 or 2/10.

:D