Screens from my campaign

Please comment on these; thanks.

It's from a RPG/Campaign that I'm currently working on...

Image 1:

"These"? There is only one picture

If its constructive critism you want, I can supply some =P

When changing hair, dont make it one tone, if your not going to actually put in "flow lines", then at least make the color not just filled in.

Make the background a bit more interesting, but not so much that it takes away from the scene. With empty hills you kind of loose the "mood" that I think you were trying to get.

Thats all I can think of, very nice shot!

Hey, I'll be posting more, so don't worry! :D

Yah, I know I still have some skinning left to do on him.

Also, for the hills, keep in mind that this is a playable map, not a cinematic. If I cover every area, it would be very hard to move around on the map.

Thanks for the comments! :D

The skins need some shading with Mogul's hair and the wings on the priest, but the terrain is good, very realistic, just add at least something to the hills to make them more interesting...

I don't agree, stripped hills are good.
It adds a certain feel. It looks... ... I love it to be honest. Now hand me some more pics before I get crancky.

Here's another pic...

Well, actually 2 combined into one...

Wow, you really know how to put feeling into the terrain, very good, however I doubt that it is good for gameplay, not enough stuff, but if it's just a cinematic it won't matter...

That region is mostly just for a cinematic, but I assure you that it IS playable. I'll post some different screens of map 1 later, but I have to go to my crappy job now.... :D

The wings look very unnatural with the priest, to be honest :(

i suggest you alpha out the tips of the borders of the priest's wings (and shade) to make them look more realistic... i also dont't know about 'super soldier mogul story'... thats not the title i hope. Otherwise it's really good... your terrainwork is amazing.

I'll see what I can do about the edge's of the angel wings. Also, the name of the game is "Super Soldier Mogul". If you don't recognize it, good; 'cause I created it. :D


Here's another picture for ya!

Very Nice :D

The wings needs tinting and shadowing... It's not bright white with gray/black lines mate...

I do love the cinematics thingys... Can't wait for you to finish!

cool but... you need some serious shading on all your skins...

and um.. whats a super solier? :ggani:

can't really say much that hasn't been said, but your terrain is wicket awesome:D !