A girl concept..

im not gonna even quote the long quoted quoted quote of doom

1. orin hater club? ignore him? if they made something that like of me... id ban their ass strait to hell cuz 1. they are flaming you, which in the rules says offensive behavior towards another, so it was your job to do something, not flame

2. well, ya i guess ur partially right, noobs arent just new comers, but you cant tell us whats really goin on or whats not, because you arent the 'leader' of us, we believe what we can and share it with everyone else... youve posted work... ya... but i mean how old are those? (so hows your cloud model goin? lol)

3. I never asked for opinions...i said C & C WELCOME. c and c? comment and critisism? if its not opinion, what do you want us to say? we can simply say nothing, not even 'thats good' cuz thats opinion too --- actually im not pissed, not the slightest way mad actually

4. random opinions would be like 'omfg! that model is horrible!' now thats.. random...

5. you dont want us to say that you copied your work (no one does, but you cant force us), you dont want us to say it looks like final fantasy, you dont want us to say anything utterly... bad

6. well, not my fault they accuse u right? im just sayin i hate when ppl say you copied your work

7. so we are still noobs for saying that your picture looks lilke final fantasy?
and we're noobs for saying that you copied your picture? (not that i like it either)

but if was really all to specific people then i guess I hafta apologize to you,
so then im sry (hey you actually took my post better than others)

eveyrone can say what they want you know? but they shouldn't when they can't back it up. like i said its ok if you say it's like final fantasy.. that's an honor for me to compared with such a well known game.. just that i don't want to hear people saying "that's a final fantasy character" without using the word "like"

anyways.. my apologies to everyone for actin so...violently o.O... i just get mad when andy talks trash.. i get out of control.. cuz this is his 10000th time..

new pic.. fixed chest. fixed eyes are sansui said... started coloring her left arm but didnt finish so i cropped it

Her right breast is still a bit small... The nipple should be located a bit farther out to her right... other than that... it's fine.

I still don't quite understand the weird sleeves... but that's just me.

icbm1987

i find something wrong on the right arm. like there's something wrong with the fold or something.

or its suppose to be something like that, some wierd clothing style?

Heh you'll see if you see the whole image. anyway, she's a priestess. her cloths are heavy and thick, it's not suppose to show much of breast. and i think the reason why the right breast looks smaller is because there are 2 layers if cloths... and you are probably just looking at the outside layer..and you need to count the inside too not just the outside... if you look at them as 1 layer, they should be about the same

Body
breasts look fine just the under layer looks odd is it suppoosed to change color like that and is she wearing 3 layers?
they must be thin layers. dont look like thick robes.
you will find most woman are lopsided.

Hair
hmm have u tried to add some material tied into her hair right now looks plain.
even those weird chopstick thingies they put in their hair might work

Face
one shiny spot under the eye that is reallllly shiny small one not larger one looks unatural. Lips maybe a little more color just a tad though.

Neck area.
The coller is held to gether by buttons? or clear tape? jk add a button or a wodden nob thing, maybe strings or long ribbions holding collar together.

Overall improvement. mainly need some more shade where collar meets second layer. and some more designs maybe a symbol embroidered on her vest (2nd layer) and something holding the collar togethar

orin, I do not start with you you just have to take everything I say so personally, and you twist it around, you think I like taking the piss out of you? No, your just the most ignorant person Ive ever seen, YOU start the flame wars, YOU misinterpret what I say, YOU are a little kid who cant take peoples thoughts, I was just sayibg that id like to see something different coming out off that asshat pen of yours, go fuck a fucking poly you fucking attention whore, go flush youself, your gone, noone likes this shit, go fucking get sued by Squaresoft you little dirtbag, ban my ass for anything, Im not gunna cry as soon as anyone tries to take the piss outa me, get a fucking life and take it like a man, thankyou Jester I appreciate support from someone that actually has more than an ounce of resilience and maturity.

Please close this thread, I cant stand to see orin make MORE of a fool of himself.

P.S. Learn to fucking spell, your grammar is as shithouse as my moms lasagne.

End of discussion, end of thread, end of your staffing position I hope, and End of me taking your immature little ass fucking up art for all the little dickheads that visit this site, GO AND GET A FUCKING LIFE FAGGOT.

yea, i did have chopstick thing for her hair, but i took them out cuz they didnt look too good..mayb ill add them back?

i actually had symbols on her first layer, took them out. i will add them after color the whole thing

sorry i didnt read all the posts before, so maybe i say same thing like others, but it looks like a nobish manga figure because there is nothing right only the eyes are perfect! distances and angels between body parts are wrong the nose for example is much to far away from the eyes and to close to the mouth, the angel between eyes mouth and nose looks wrong, and watch her long small gype/neck and her strong big arm, didnt you see this yourselfe that this is wrong? and on you picture it looks like she had only a left brest, what happend to the right one? amputaded? ^^ ok but all in all if you dont know much about mangas and watch only the colores and the eyes it looks good!

Obviously you dont know the style very well if you did you would realise the nose isnt too far down. And she does have a right breast its just at an angle
Its not Orins fault he didnt draw a girl with a brests bigger than her head.
And if u realised that her right arm is a the sleeve of the shirt then you wouldnt think that is too big.

hmm... looking much better, but i would suggest some shading underneath those bangs that hang down her cheeks...

and yeah you should put something in the hair, but i was thinking more of cloth then of chopsticks for that matter...

and i just have to say i read it all, and have to agree with orin on a lot of points.

some of you did get quite close to flaming... now that would be ok if it was combined with some constructibveness, but you didnt... thats what went wrong i think...

WHICH ONE OF YOU STUPID FUCKWITS DELETED MY POST.

Just because you DONT want people kickin the piss out o you, doesnt mean you cant hear what I have to say.

fuck you orin, no wonder people think your a fucked up cow.

dude... you need to chill...

*hands andy a beer and a blunt*

there that oughtta do it...