A girl concept..

well.. i drew a girl..and wanted to make it simple yet clean art for game concept.. didnt finish coloring but since i havent been postin up in here for a while now... i thought i would post something..
i resized it down because it was too big. and of course cut out the parts i havent finished. C&C welcome.

wow! stunning beautiful, looks a lot like a game concept (could see this in a final fantasy character concept), couldnt see how to improve, ur coloring is so good... id like to color like that :D Gj

... we all thought u left... just took up and left...

whats with the very long abscense?

wow, that picture is really nice... she looks like she's... she looks like rikku from final fantasy :\

its decently drawn, you obviously master more than the basics...but...wtf...why are you drawing innocent girls...you pervert..

^ lol. So um, is that japanese themed AOS still on? I'm dying to get to terrain it.

i get the feeling ull be banned again teneur if u continu acting like that...

Very nice Orin... and I'm glad to see you here.

The left side of the collar (our left) goes too far out and is a bit too high... it looks awkward.

Her right breast (our left again) looks to be much smaller than her left (our right).

And I kinda see that you really want to do all the folds... but... that apron thing wouldn't really hang that way...

I hope what I have said helps... and Tenuer... don't be so offensive.

icbm1987

wow, i wish i was able to color like that.... my colors never look that smooth and natural >.<

I agree with icbm about the folds, especially on the folds on HER left breast. other thing is that her left eye (on our right) looks a bit odd, perhaps a little bit like it has too many folds and droops in an odd fashion.

still with everything else, it is great. as i said with my comment about my own inadequacies, i think that the quality of the coloring is spectacular. GJ

Well, I haven't seen you in a long time - well, I haven't been here for long period time though.

Yes, the collar is bit off on one side.

The folds of the clothes are the weak point, they don't quite flow properly which also makes here chest off. The right breast is looks small because of the the folds location across the chest (it's just isn't flowing right).

Anyways though, it's really is colored well.

yeah... ive been gone a while. i had papers, then finals, then a week long backpacking trip, but im back now

Still a great coloring job

the hair reminds me some girl in final fantasy X

she looks a bit... eehm.. stoned?..

yeah.. stoned... but i've seen you draw floaty girls like that before, its not a bad thing...

everything hasa been said, i had all my comments ready and they have all been said by variouse persons so all thats left is my opinion:
shes
foxy
thnx...

Its definentely a good peice, but Id really like to see you do some more imaginative characters, Im so bored of you either copying other characters or drawing ones that are almost exactly the same, that would be cool, I think youre up to it.

that reminds me of that witch hunter robin girl

andy juss shut up cuz u dunno jack about art.
i dont copy shit.