Anime attempt 2!!

Hehe i guess im lucky i got this whole collection when i was young, each week or 2 week my mother was buying me a book... grrr im angry i still didnt found that damn pencil, i guess ill have to use another one then my H pencil, ill try to look at some proportion before ill do next one, now i got to find Saboera special description page in one of the 37 books, if he seem unproportional it will be normal he is some kind of midget demon and hes very old and crazy but hes a pro in magic, also hes coward like hell

hey, you should have a box and put some pencils in that, so its in your range. a pencil may fall on the ground, and if you have an animal he will eat it and die from the chemicals in the pen or get stabbed by the pointy edge.

Well i lost it somewhere in my house and well my dog (when he was alive) was eating lots of thing that are more chimic then that, i doubt it would have kill him, he already ate a pack of crayola, a razer O_o, soap and anything you cant even imagine

Wooohooo!! Saboera!!!! donw with it

its actually look exactly like him, its lack of shading but they dont shade either in the book

i dont know how he is, but you can shade him ( that's an harassing comment, no? :D ) even if the authours didnt included shading, its better to eat two cookies than one, but if the lightning was omnipresent then i cant whine about it. ok first, i dont know why he looks like that, or what kind of psychofrenezic tormanted man could draw such a weird little man hovering, but it honestly scares me a bit. i will now comment your yummy drawing with my horrible grammar/vocalubary/knowledge about the English languague. please note i used the popular google search engine to view a bit of saboera to get myself a idea how he looks like..
damn, that's horrible, what show does it comes from?!
anyways, your drawing is mostly identical to what it indeed looks like. but for the forehead jewelry, id suggest using a thicker line, that gives the impression that something strongs holds the triangle jewel. you could have added more exagerated forehead folds, and a different mouth, and make it lift a lot. from the reference image, i think he have a sphere head, different from the human head definitivly. you could stomp a bit his lower face. and most important on his face; give him a different look, now hes looking his feets float with a rather pacific mouth, but its nice you added some folds near his mouths, but they're not demonstrative enough, they could have been made longer, and point towards the nose, since its the base of the fold coming from the cheeks.

well wow, here the folds amazes me. but he have none on his arms. he have a mouth shaped shape where you see his legs. it could be curved at some places to give the feeling of a fold.

also, and finally, the legs could have a different leg, otherwise there should be severally more folds where his knees are. his legs have a 30* angle, id suggest a 0*angle, or a completly different stance.
his whole face, except mouth, and his clothes seems to have been done with ease. congrats, its nice. it could use more details under his nose, get a reference, if you have, and you can notice something more spectactular here than what you illustrated.
i hope i helped, if not, that may be my grammar.

i actually have lots of reference of him and his legs are really like that, he float in the air O_o btw its from the manga book serie Fly (in french) i think its rare now since i bought those a long time ago and never saw them again... anyway i think theres a anime show too

About him: hes the leader of the wizards army, basically hes one of the 9 generals of Hadora (King of Evil) and of course there is a God of Evil who command Hadora called Ban, living in a palace and really powerful, thats a great serie

Btw: hes really a pain in the *** to draw, he got a weird head shape most of the face is done by looking at reference of him

lack of shading, ur gonna need a few more wrinkles, and hes just plain creepy

(i just got back from canada and i am so tired, but its midnight, anyways... i went to montreal - holiday inn at chinatown with my parents for a night, man it was the best! bought myself a pretty good sword, now i have 'quarters from canadia)

now i will to color him like tommorow, ill add shading there

Hehe sword, hope you enjoyed your trip, have u ate some ''poutine'' ?

poutine.... poutine...
that jello/pudding stuff with sugar on top?
i had those, sweet then disastrously bitter at the end for me

nope its French fries + sauce + Special cheese, theres a lot of kind but its the basic

btw i forgot to mention about Saboera head, he got the same number of Facial lines in each poses

(Shadow_Strike, I hope you live anywhere but Canada because we Canadians know poutine. :8 )

I liked the last drawing of yours, but he still seems plain. It's OK that there's no shading but he doesn't look to be in a good pose.

BTW I think I might start scanning some pics and posting in these forums. I blow at drawing but I prefer my style, straight off the top of my head, and mostly cartoony (although usually I draw World War II things and such so I'll make the change to fantasy).

this is poutine.
a bowl containing french fries, sauce and cheese.

Ra-Ra-Rasputin.

Canada rocks (more precisely Quebec!)

Poutine is a creation of ours... and its good that Americans didnt steal it yet... did they? ... ...

And sumtimes we add a sort of spagheti sauce variant and we call it italian poutine, and sumtimes we add bacon, sour cream, green onions and call it sumthing else...

Thats right
@shadow we are the kings of maple stuff too , you could try coming in end of winter for sugar time

this is getting way offtopic but no one seems to be caring...

o well

i live in machester, 3-5 hrs south of montreal, so........ ya... no poutine for me
looks delicious tho

i like hard maple, i know Canadia the king of maple, its everywhere XP