please post it in the skins gallery so you can receive proper critics. If i would have to go deeper into critisizm, i'd first say you need to post a pic of the skin in game, with a fiew action shots, thats always better.
right now i really dont know what you want with it... its just one big recolor with messy random colors all over it,
do you want to skin it like an orc? becouse if you want to do that you better just make him green and change the face a bit, trolls have distinktivly diffrent faces from orcs. |