melee terrain

do u think this terrain is good enough for a custom melee match? (this is my first try)
and if it isnt do you have some tips for me

ver1
ver2

dunno what to say, no they do not.

how do you reach your enemies etz..?

u can reach them from the sea with ships you got ramps from shallow water to land and by land you have the passages they are wide enough for troops

maybe you have tip for improvement or should i just burn this and start from scratch?

Could be some thing fun, a altered meele map, highlighting sea battles, making some tweak with ships, e.g board, or canons, etz...

But Burn this one, also I recomend using another Tyile type, try village or some thing like that (my personal preference)

Also... I can barely see any doodads on these screenshots I want to see more of those! =)

Before you start to make a melee map, it’s probably a good idea to look at, play, and maybe even watch some pro replays of maps similar to the one you want to make. This will give you insight into how the maps are laid out, what features are important, how different features will affect game play etc.

Have a read of Blizzards Melee Map Tutorial as well; it has a few key pointers about layout, creeps, neutral buildings etc.