oh, ok... But it still needs to be brighter, the black back ground near the beam needs to also be glowy. I would try to give it a more unified centeral glow, so the other bits are like concentrated tendrils, that eat rocks. (wait, they dont eat rocks, my bad)
i don't see the love. :P It looks more like some "holy light/energy thing" coming to destroy all defilers. :D I like the detail though. I would stick this in a museum. ^ ^