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06-26-2008, 02:07 AM#1
moyack
Ok, I've decided to add here all the drawings that I'll do in order to get used to PS3.

Currently I'm experimenting with the pressure pencil, and I did it with Hulk (Emjrl will be happy or this :P)

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Th outcome is not bad but I feel it can be improved. You know, comments and suggestions are really appreciated.
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06-26-2008, 02:30 AM#2
Dwarf Zealot
love it, just saw the hulk movie and it socked my rocks
06-26-2008, 04:14 AM#3
Kyrbi0
I, too, just saw the Hulk movie today. It roxxoxxoxxored my soxxoxxoxx... Eh, it was just plain good :P. Like Candy, or Season 1 Spongebob.

(Now I'm not art buff, but)
Overall, I'm highly impressed; anyone who can draw instantly has my respect in some form; especially that well. The stubble is teh pwn, and you got the furrowed eyebrows just right. Love the neck-veins, too.

That being said, I'd say he needs more... "brutality" and pure ripped-ness. I.e., make the muscles bulgier and more 'corded', and the face more toughened and 'grimace-y'. Perhaps more stubbly stubble, to lend a rugged air to him. Also, since it's Photoshop, y'gotta give him some kind of "glowy-eye" thing going on. I know it's possible... DON'T LIE TO ME!

Anyway, yeah. Great stuff.
06-26-2008, 03:35 PM#4
Archian
You are still improving with PS3.

About the drawing, his pectoralis major mucles are too small.
Perhaps enlarge them a bit. Also a lil' more contrast would do nicely.

EDIT: Also, shouldn't this be in the concept art / fan art forum?
06-26-2008, 04:44 PM#5
Kurjuus
and on top of that the whole jaw and mouth are looks like it was a single plane. The major cause for this is the mouth being way too wide and not really alinging along the muzzle. Also some wrong shading.

Better also make the character pop out more from the background which means work with different hues and saturation. Even if you want it in one color a bit of color variation won't hurt.
06-26-2008, 07:09 PM#6
moyack
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Originally Posted by Dwarf Zealot
love it, just saw the hulk movie and it socked my rocks
Yay!! <3<3<3 I have to see it this weekend... but my fever to see it makes me draw it :P

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Originally Posted by Kyrbi0
(Now I'm not art buff, but)
Overall, I'm highly impressed; anyone who can draw instantly has my respect in some form; especially that well. The stubble is teh pwn, and you got the furrowed eyebrows just right. Love the neck-veins, too.

That being said, I'd say he needs more... "brutality" and pure ripped-ness. I.e., make the muscles bulgier and more 'corded', and the face more toughened and 'grimace-y'. Perhaps more stubbly stubble, to lend a rugged air to him. Also, since it's Photoshop, y'gotta give him some kind of "glowy-eye" thing going on. I know it's possible... DON'T LIE TO ME!

Anyway, yeah. Great stuff.
This was one first approach, but I'm planning to do another one, full body and with more detail. As I said before, I'm getting used to PS3 (honestly I don't know why it has been so hard :P) But yes, a glowy eye is a thing that I can't avoid.

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Originally Posted by Archian
You are still improving with PS3.

About the drawing, his pectoralis major mucles are too small.
Perhaps enlarge them a bit. Also a lil' more contrast would do nicely.

EDIT: Also, shouldn't this be in the concept art / fan art forum?
yes, I'll work more with the pectorals in order to manipulate the colors and "remove" the outlines, but as I've said before, I'll work with a better concept, a more dynamic pose, etc...

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Originally Posted by Kurjuus
and on top of that the whole jaw and mouth are looks like it was a single plane. The major cause for this is the mouth being way too wide and not really alinging along the muzzle. Also some wrong shading.

Better also make the character pop out more from the background which means work with different hues and saturation. Even if you want it in one color a bit of color variation won't hurt.
The mouth!! that was the reason why I feel that something was wrong... yes, you're definitely right. He needs better lips :P

I'll work with the color variation, as you can see in the screenshot, I started my drawing with the base green and then I added the lights and shadow to give shape to the drawing. My plan is to draw based on color and not based on outlines filled with color.

thank you everybody for your comments, this night I'll post more drawings made by me, a preview of a concept which has been bugging my head for a while.
06-27-2008, 09:26 AM#7
Gorman
Line variation is realy cool, practice drawing anime stuff so you can get better at line variation. Set the pen do make thicker lines when u press harder =)

you have good form (except i dont like it in this one ^^), so line technique will make ur style even more epic
12-02-2008, 01:15 AM#8
moyack
Christmas time...
what would happen if orcs celebrate this holiday?

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12-02-2008, 01:58 AM#9
Kyrbi0
Alright... Just +Win.
Especially because it's bandwagonally-inspired, thematically.
12-02-2008, 02:22 AM#10
Rising_Dusk
I like your line-art a lot when you keep it clean.