Demon Days

This is a storyline I made for a cinematic for my toys when i was 7 yrs old.
Now it's time to see it in a map... CINEMATIC MAP! I will publish this storyline and see if it will buy the ass of people..

Chapter One: The Planecrash
King Frederick Hawks had a complication with the Neighbor Kingdom, and he has been alerted that the patrols in the borderline has been assasinated by suspicious men in copper plated armors. Prince Drake Hawks, trusted by his father, has been sent in a mission together with an elite crew and a goblin engineer and a goblin pilot.... but due to gas leaks, his plane crashed in a barren mountain called Mt. Loghard... injuring himself and his elite crew, Drake has to rescue survivors and make it to the base of the mountain before the aircraft explodes!

Chapter Two: Ogre Stampede
Upon collecting all of his remaining men, Drake reached the half of the mountain. He and his men needed resources to survive, but all they have is date trees and locusts to eat. On the journey, Drake saw their pilots and a barrage of bloated ogres. The pilots apologized for their neglectance, and an idea stormed their minds; Drake and his men can't pass the barrage alive, the goblins offered themselves to blow the ogres blocking their way. The goblin suicide bombed on the path, Drake and his men gratitudes for the goblin's act. Reaching the base of the mountain and rushing through time(the vessel is exploding, duh!). Drake and his men discovers an Ogre stampede and their crisis is to bypass the whole stampede and saving the natural resources tormented by the viscous hunger of the ogres.

Chapter Three: Diabolic Help
Thirthy men, One unexperienced leader and a barrage of ogres. Drake and his men are helpless to battle, but they have no choice but to push thru. Blood and sweat, Drake an his men conquered the ogres. But they were just too many, however Drake's men retreated. Hunger and exhaustion eated their will to survive, Drake's men passed out. Drake woke up in a small roofless clinic, and he alerts hiself when he saw a demon with a mechanical hump on his back. Paniced, the demon conforted him by introducing himself as a doctor. Explaining what happened, Drake no has to find his lost men together with 3 survivors with him.

Chapter Four: Tempt
While Drake is gone searching, Ven' Gyr the Doctor prepares for a settlement. But while doing it, he is sensing a negative energy nearby. He stared in an oak tree, then attacked it with lightning. Revealing a demon lurking, Ven' Gyr recognized a voice. It was his brother after all, Ven' Boli. Ven' Gyr talk to his brother and asked why he's here. Ven' Gyr then calmed himself and listened to his brother on his invitation. Ven' Boli is inviting Ven' Gyr to surrender and be with his kingdom in the underworld(Obvously, Ven' Boli is the king of the underworld.). Ven' Boli added that if he surrender now and kneel to him, his brother might be the next on the throne. Ven' Gyr refused, Ven' Gyr gave up his way to hustle. Ven' Boli tempted Ven' Gyr, a demon tempting a demon. But on the third, Ven' Gyr finally accepted. The brothers walk through a shimmering portal and left the real world.

You can also ask for permission to publish this story in a "map" form

Aw... It's so short. Considering that it's going to be translated into a campaign though, you don't want too many words, otherwise it clutters against the action. I've known a few campaigns that get too wordy. It's a nice feature at first, but it begins to become bothersome.

Keep going. One chapter isn't enough to analyze your entire campaign. From how Chapter One looks like right now, it's an introduction with no plot being revealed.

There.. Chapter Two and Three :D

I don't get it. Drake is trying to get back to the the Kingdom, isn't he?

of course he is, but he needs to survive first... there's an ogre stampede that they need to cross first before it. But he can't just simply abandon other survivors... HE'S A PRINCE, remember?

Now that diablo's helping him to get well. Well, there's chapter 4.