| 08-02-2008, 09:42 PM | #1 |
| 08-02-2008, 10:10 PM | #2 |
i think theres something wrong with the chest proportions, maybe the arms, he looks kinda short and fat. other then that its pretty good. |
| 08-03-2008, 02:26 AM | #3 |
His proportions are a bit off. His head is too small and he seems too tall. He also has no shoulders and his arm muscles are not 100% correct. Not much to add besides that he seems a bit too "normal", I don't know what was your goal when you started drawing it, but I suggest you to add something to make him "cooler", like some piercings or tatoos, or even a pet or weapon. (http://www.reybustos.com/04er/er.html offers some cool reference material if you ever need some :).) Edit: correcting typos =p |
