| 08-13-2008, 10:43 AM | #1 |
i have an other art of myself on www.freewebs.com/mforce-arts thats my site leave your reaction at the guest book:) |
| 08-16-2008, 09:16 PM | #2 |
it's okay, I guess. I dunno, there's something off about the way the body connects to the head. And the proportions are off. Very off, especially considering that the right (his right) leg looks like it's about 3/4 the length of the left, even taking into account that it's bent. |
| 08-16-2008, 09:48 PM | #3 |
The sketch looks fine but wtf is up with that horrible green color you've applied? Totally ruins the entire picture. |
| 08-18-2008, 07:14 AM | #4 |
Its far too messy, the balance is off and the anatomy in the arm is wtf and dislocated/short. :/ |
| 08-20-2008, 06:39 PM | #5 |
+What's conceptual about this? |
| 08-21-2008, 08:06 PM | #6 | |
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A question that's rather pointless if you take a look at about 80% of the images in here. Oh, and btw: HE'S A MIDGET!!!!1!!1!11!! *points to picture* Which means it has totally unfunctional proportions and stuffz alike... but meh, constructive criticism on something like that is anyway useless since the only piece of advice I could give you is DRAW MOAR and every improvement comes with it (if you use your brain while drawing it will speed up the improvement) |
| 08-24-2008, 09:11 AM | #7 |
i guess its a bit messy becouse it was my FIRST drawning made on a pc |
| 08-26-2008, 01:51 PM | #8 |
Try blocking out where the body parts go, and the proportions of the pic before you start. It seems that his proportions are wrong, and his neck comes out of his back. Also left arm isnt long enough =( Keep working at it, its a bit messy (did u use smudge or sumthing?), but looks pretty nice. |
| 08-28-2008, 02:31 PM | #9 | |
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| 09-03-2008, 07:51 PM | #10 |
The arms seem a little stiff, IMO. |
