| 10-04-2008, 05:22 PM | #1 |
Keep in mind that these are exactly what the title says. So, give feedback criticism, tips. I'd like to thank /Naze for lots of help, and tips. |
| 10-05-2008, 04:58 AM | #2 |
They're all pretty good, except the terrain just looks too flat. Individually, - The Cave Mouth I liked this one, but as the other thread's replies said, it looked a bit flat. - The night time shot over the forest This one was pretty good, had atmosphere but it lacked doodad variation. - The crystals Looked like crystal spam. - The daytime shot It looked bare in some areas and lacked tree variations. |
| 10-06-2008, 08:57 PM | #3 |
I like them all. Al you have to work on is making the terrain less straight, like mini-hills in certain places and little dips in others. Also variation with doodads, as Tide said. Good job. |
| 10-06-2008, 09:01 PM | #4 |
They all are better than my terrain skills, then I'm below beginner... |
| 10-06-2008, 11:17 PM | #5 |
:P I just really started the other day. As in . . . hmmm Saturday? |
| 10-06-2008, 11:50 PM | #6 |
Now make terrain for our paired mapping thing |
| 10-07-2008, 01:05 AM | #7 | |
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Dat should be your job. Anyway: ~Updated "Light Forest Path" |
| 11-24-2008, 04:43 AM | #8 |
This is no beginner terrain. |
| 01-29-2009, 12:09 PM | #9 |
They look good all, yes, but lack some minor things. Varitation, depth, small details. For example the first pic, cave mouth, is too flat. Some hills further away to cover those ugly edges could work, or just ground that is going uphill. Night picture lacks details and the fog effect could cover more forrest. Crystal cave pic is too.. simple. Lot's of crystals in one spot, which is middle of the picture. And as the last picture is same terrain as the night-picture, it lacks details and varitation. They look good at first sight, but when you go to details... plenty of things that could been done better. But, keep it up! ^^ |