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Dark Elf Sorceress

10-28-2008, 03:13 PM#1
Mordiggian
Another WH inspired piece... Not sure what is it that I am not pleased with this. I quess you guys tell me soon enough :D
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10-28-2008, 06:41 PM#2
Kyrbi0
I'm no artist, but:

- The face looks... swirled. Kinda off and liney. Can't really describe it.
- Is it male or female? Long hair, feminine features/legs, but shirt is open and doesn't... "look" female. :/ So either needs a shirt, or more masculine??
- The left hand and staff are pure win, however. Love the white-lined "charged with power" look.
- Mega-ponytail kinda reminds me of Sc Zealots... :P
10-28-2008, 10:20 PM#3
bananaHUNT
Looks nice man; maybe you don't like it because her hair is kinda static and her right hand is kinda big/manly? idk, i like it; could use some features on the boots and staff though.
10-29-2008, 01:09 AM#4
Rising_Dusk
This is actually quite cool. I think her forehead is too long and her right fist too large for the depth of it in the image, gives a false sense of proportions. Otherwise, I really like your style.
10-29-2008, 04:51 AM#5
Nuclear Arbitor
bigger boobs and her foot is kinda weird, to skinny and long, looks kinda like a fork
10-29-2008, 05:33 AM#6
Mordiggian
Nah, I was thinking that feet were too short. But when roughly made 1/2 of the body length they're not that bad. Just noticed how awful her pelvis looks.

As for the boobs and other feminine characters, I was kinda holding back since I did not know just how over proportioned would still hit the limits of good taste, obviously I was too cautious. Which is stupid cos I myself like over-proportioned cartoon style, dunno why I tried to go by the "public opinion" on this one :D
10-29-2008, 05:33 PM#7
Kyrbi0
So it is a girl... Gah...
10-29-2008, 11:14 PM#8
Nuclear Arbitor
read the title.
10-30-2008, 03:34 AM#9
Kyrbi0
*slaps forehead*
10-31-2008, 01:10 AM#10
artforge
It is pretty nice, my only criticism is really her pelvis, and her right tigh.
10-31-2008, 02:43 AM#11
AnemicRoyalty
hrm, the problem with her hips is that they are way too narrow and her bum is below her crotch :O

also, I think her legs are a little too short.

other than that, awesome stuff :D