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01-03-2009, 06:32 AM#1
Hawkwing
What is it? I don't know what exactly I'd call this. Simply put, it's an armoured Faceless One. What do I intend to do next? I want to do some detailing on the shoulders and make it more than a the standard shape: a pad with a metal outline around it.

Critique is highly appreciated. I also want to know what you all think I should do in the gray areas on his chest, and should I add more tonal contrast to the chest or leave it as it is?
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01-03-2009, 07:19 AM#2
Ikum-bokum
Sah-weet, Hawk. Let's see some more.
01-03-2009, 09:14 AM#3
Archian
Looking good. Keep it up!

It does bare a odd resemblance to this, though.
01-03-2009, 09:20 AM#4
Rising_Dusk
I like it so far -- and if it's even remotely close in style to a Donphan, then I like it even more.
01-03-2009, 10:12 AM#5
Rao Dao Zao
It is pretty bad-ass. Reminds me more of the robo-Grobo from the end of LBA2, but that's still good.
01-03-2009, 11:00 AM#6
olofmoleman
LBA is so awesome.

Also, nice skin so far.
01-03-2009, 06:29 PM#7
Hawkwing
Quote:
Originally Posted by Archian
Looking good. Keep it up!

It does bare a odd resemblance to this, though.

Yeah, not the first time I've gotten that comment.
01-03-2009, 07:56 PM#8
THE_END
Lolz Donphan, I loved that Poke ^_^
Anyways, I like it, all the colors work very nicely with each other
Now show another WIP!
01-03-2009, 09:36 PM#9
Hawkwing
In time. Later today hopefully. I appreciate all the positive comments, but I still haven't had my questions answered. Could you guys please read the first post and give me your opinion?

As for the name, I was thinking Donphaceless One. You like?

Edit: More contrast, more detail, more win.
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01-04-2009, 06:51 AM#10
Shade987
The shoulders seem a bit blurry, but it still looks cool overall.
01-04-2009, 06:56 AM#11
Hawkwing
On the side closest to the camera is stretched. Just Blizzard being stupid. I can't do anything about that with out screwing up the other side. That probably took a hit on the sharpness.

Edit: I did this before the previous post, so I haven't sharpened anything, but it's an update nontheless.
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01-04-2009, 02:23 PM#12
Ikum-bokum
Good use of teamcolor. You're getting there.
01-12-2009, 03:20 AM#13
holyadvocate
The Blizzard skins featured plenty of sinew, go in that direction for the chest/arms...
01-12-2009, 03:35 AM#14
Hawkwing
Sinew?
01-12-2009, 05:01 AM#15
NiRVaNa_87
It doesn´t look very metallic right now, it needs more contrast. Also, maybe it just me, but the face could be more original, specially with that plane in the face, you should mess around with it some more...