| 03-03-2009, 03:58 PM | #1 |
Current Version - Ultimate Fighters v 0.1j Please comment and i may need your help to improve this map(even just a hotkey problem, grammar...) Thanks... I will often update it  Description It is about battle between characters from anime and game. Objective/Mission 1.Kill the boss 2.Get the flag 3.Bring the flag to the circle under the enemies' statue 4.Repeat this two more time 5.Destroy statue to win Credits Thanks: Few Triggers by~ Kurogane, www.hiveworkshop.com & others Models by~ Ebisux, JFZ, Kurogane, Mital, Sasuke31, Zerox, General Frank, Kitabatake, Jigrael, Minkeun0806, Pyritie, JetFangInferno, M c !, www.hiveworkshop.com , www.wc3c.net & others Music by~ Crisis Core:Final Fantasy 7 _ One World Enermy and all the animation soundtracks... Updated Updated v 0.1j -Mission/Objective changed. -Defend Towers will be summoned once the enemy brings the Flag to the circle. -Kills Boss to gain extra 1000 golds for all team members. -Flag's effect is added. -Both Statue's shield are added. -Boss and Creeps are stronger. -Central Creeps' spawn time changed a bit. -Portal at Boss place changed. -Introduction changes and is available to skip. -Warning and information in game have colour. -Starting golds are reduced to 1000. -Ichigo Bankai level is changed to 7. -Some fighters skill's level skip requirement and requirement level are adjusted. -Grammar & Spelling Mistake fixed a bit. Updated v 0.1i -change some terrain. -add defend towers when statue'hp is less than 10k. -change the top travellor location to the place near wolf. -map size is smaller a lot. Updated from v 0.1 to v 0.1h -Fighters are now total 8 (Ichigo,Byakuya,Goku,Naruto,Sasuke,Sakura,Sephiroth & Cloud) -Cloud's,Ichigo's and Goku's Skill is complete -available for 3 versus 3 only -items based on character |
| 03-04-2009, 03:11 AM | #2 |
First of all, if you want your map to be accepted into wc3c map database. You should abide the rules of this site. http://www.wc3c.net/announcement.php?f=656 Map database of wc3c is not a site for incomplete or beta stage map, this area is only for complete map and not for you to get any constructive critism. If you wish to get constructive critism, you should have post it at map testing thread. Be prepare for strict critism of what's wrong with it. 1) Description at map thread - Terrible and awful, it not only breaking the map submission rules. You do not provide a screenshot of your map, what's special about it, what makes it fun and many more. Please elaborate more about your map before you submit it. All I know right now about this map was the map theme was based on anime. 2) Triggering/Scripting - Poor scripting, full of memory leak and most of the scripting could be optimize for better performance. Just look at this trigger below. Trigger:  Spawn Creep lvl1
  Events
   Time - Every 50.00 seconds of game time
  Conditions
  Actions
  Unit - Create 40 (Random level 1 creep unit-type) for Neutral Hostile at (Center of Centre <gen>) facing Default building facing degrees40 creep at 1 go every 50 seconds and it was leaking? This would cause a serious problem if it was play under a full house. 3) Terrain - Poorly develop terrain, the cliff look horrible and what's the point of adding the elevator at the cliff? It just make it look much worst. 4) Grammar & Spelling - I might not be fluent in English, but I know a spelling error when I seen it. This map have lot's of grammar and spelling error. You mistype such as "possible" as "posible", "enemy" as "enermy" and "teammate" as "teamate". The grammar error could also been seen from this sentence "Protect the your teamate if he is the one taking the flag", you could have wrote "Protect your teammate if they are the flag bearer". If you are not fluent in English, you should get somebody to help you about it. 5) Description - Description inside the game doesn't have much different either. Once the game started, there is a brief description indicate this map was a CTF (Capture the flag) map. However, trying to select hero was a pain in the neck. How am I suppose to know what ability does the hero have? When a player wanted to select a hero, they would likely want to know what ability does the hero have. The quest log doesn't do any much help either. 6) Bug - Lot's of hotkey doesn't function, missing or clash with another hotkey. To make this map a even worst lemon, it seems like every import icon was missing dis_btn icon. 7) Item - Nothing fancy about the item, it seems like it was using the basic warcraft 3 item. 8) Originality - Nothing original about it, it seems like it was a combination of Hero Arena with Capture The Flag. 9) Fun/Replayability - Nothing fun about it. The spell might look "Wow", but the gameplay was absolutely dull. It seems just to have 1 objective, hack & slash the enemy hero or creep till you are strong enough to kill the boss. Kill the boss, get the flag, send to enemy circle of power to make the structure vulnerable and then destroy it. That's all. 10) Import - Most of the import seems partically pointless, It seems like you import a lot of sound that partically cause the file size to be 3.6. 3.6mb was a rather huge file size for a multiplayer map. If I want to play a map of anime theme, I would probably prefer to play Naruto vs Bleach by Kisame or Fight Of Character under various reason compare to this map. This map was lacking in several aspect and the only thing that might probably keep the user entertain was the custom spell, but it seems like 2 out of 5 spell of the hero was the only custom spell. Based on the condition, this map would likely to be rejected at hiveworkshop, let alone wc3c. |
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