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Dominance War IV - Kaeil

04-25-2009, 04:16 PM#1
Waynebebay
This is the starting sketches of my Abomination character for Dominance War.

04-26-2009, 03:17 AM#2
NiRVaNa_87
I said it before, I still thing that it needs SOMETHING to make it more menacing, instead of being a simple creep.
Most of the entries I´ve seen rely on some kind of artifact for the character, which IMO brings a lot of charisma to the guy. No saying that you should do the same, but try to find something to make this more unique.
04-26-2009, 02:16 PM#3
Waynebebay
Quote:
Originally Posted by NiRVaNa_87
I said it before, I still thing that it needs SOMETHING to make it more menacing, instead of being a simple creep.
Most of the entries I´ve seen rely on some kind of artifact for the character, which IMO brings a lot of charisma to the guy. No saying that you should do the same, but try to find something to make this more unique.

Yea I haven't really worked on personality yet, I was going for concepts for what I wanted the creature to look like because I normally struggle with this when I get half way done with the painting normally so this will be helpful material for when I start to evolve the character... Basically this is more or less a features sketch, the features I would like the creature to have. By the way I will start some concepts digitally today.
04-27-2009, 01:50 AM#4
NiRVaNa_87
Ok, cool. I´ll wait for the digi then :)
04-27-2009, 01:24 PM#5
Waynebebay
Whew, I have not used my wacom tablet in a minute. It seemed like everything I tried to do on the tablet sucked sooo I need to warm up a bit and take it slow. Right now I am coming up with head concepts. I will upload them when I am finished.
04-28-2009, 10:51 PM#6
Waynebebay
New stuff, experimenting with positions

04-29-2009, 04:13 AM#7
artforge
that head looks too big / like the WoW's pit lord...
Anyway, seems like you're doing well with your concepts, but it's too early to give any really constructive criticism.
05-02-2009, 03:26 PM#8
Waynebebay
New concept with arm variations

05-02-2009, 08:15 PM#9
NiRVaNa_87
The chest area looks really boring, but it´s getting there. I like this concept more than the old one. I´m not sure about the colors, maybe when you get further with the drawings it´ll be easier to say. And try to do something with the mouth so it doesn´t look like a vagina.
05-03-2009, 01:19 AM#10
Waynebebay
Update, got a concept I am happy with and started coloring.

05-03-2009, 03:13 AM#11
NiRVaNa_87
Looking good
05-03-2009, 01:45 PM#12
Waynebebay
thanks man
05-05-2009, 04:50 AM#13
Gorman
very nice man,, seems a little lifeless tho
05-06-2009, 09:23 PM#14
Waynebebay
update.. I wish I had more time, work has got me coming home late and spending time with my wife is cut down so I haven't had the time to work on this as much as I would like to.

05-06-2009, 09:42 PM#15
Kyrbi0
Eww, pus bleeding from his palm?