Lone Wolf

Hello everbody, this is a RPG campaign based on the serie of the gambooks Lone Wolf from Joe Dever. It is just introduction and first chapter Flight from the Dark. Next chapters will come, but I do not know when, because creating one isnt for one day. It is not made exactly like was the gamebook, I made some little changes.

I used some models from this site and from some others, so I give thanks to the people who made them (in credits at the end of the map :).

One IMPORTANT thing, I am from Czech republic (central Europe) and my english is not very good (I know just what I have learned by playing videogames, I never studied this language and I translated the texts in the map via on-line dictionaries) - so please excuse me if the text is wrong and grammar incorrect (but I hope is possible understand to it)

All critics are welcome...

Goodbye.

I suggest you read the Map Submission rules and fix your thread before a moderator sees this.

Moved to Maps & Campaigns. This is not a feedback forum, this is for completed maps that will follow the submission rules and actually put some effort into their threads and maps.

Rising_Dusk, I was unaware that maps were capable of putting effort into the creation of other maps (let alone forum threads!). o_o"

SkyNet, bitches.

sorry? I dont understand what I did incorrect. I put the map in wrong place? if yes what I have to do?

Im a big greenhorn here and I dont know what´s what in this web very well

If you actually wanted to submit your map to the database and undergo the rigorous approval process, then this is what you did wrong. If you wanted feedback on your map and for people to play it, then it is currently in the correct forum.

Eh, actually I wanted submit my map to database and udergo the approval process (not to avoid the right process) because my map is done (although is just first chapter from larger campaign) and was tested by players from czech warcraft3 community (in czech version of course, not in english, the translation of texts I´ve done recently for this web). What I wish too is a feedback from the people which is visiting this website. Please patience and excuse me one more time, if I did something incorrect, I´m beginning to acquint over here and for somebody who is new here, who do not speak english very well and who need to work with on-line dictionaries (like me) it is not easy.

If now is in correct forum then I hope some constructive critics soon.... and I wish to people which download my map have fun by playing it

But this inherently means that the campaign is not done and thus shouldn't be submitted to the database.
See, it really sounds to me like you want feedback (obviously), and thus it is now in the correct forum. The map submissions forum is not for feedback, it is for reviewing. The difference is crucial, because what matters for reviewing is that your map sucked or was awesome, not necessarily an extensive reasoning as to why. The review process is not to be abused for feedback, that is against the rules.

ok you´re right :) now I understand what to do for next time, thank you for your patience anyway
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and what about commenting the map, or nobody won´t spend a little word?