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Narcainian Assasin

11-22-2009, 11:25 PM#1
Dentothor







Narcainian Assasin


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Several disputes about who technically owned North America happened from 2019 to 2054 eventually, President Gaelen ordered Mexico to hand over their land or a Nuclear missile would stain it. Eventually, the Canadians ended up in this dispute. It was on September 11th 2060 that the Americans then completely lost their minds in madness and let off an Ununquadium Bomb along the Mexican Coast (America had several scientific breakthroughs with the unknown elements, ununtrium, ununquadium, and ununpentium. Ununhexium and ununoctium are still unknown). The bomb chemically altered certain species and the others it killed (humans being one of them). It killed around 3,000,000 Mexicans that day. Realizing what they had done, they sent a Bio Team into Mexico to see if there were any survivors.

It turns out that one of the altered species was Insects. These insects had developed a superior instinct and agility. The Americans then had to lay peace to these creatures. But they had also developed minds... In 2065, President Gaelin had arrived to commune with the creatures of which he decided to call, Narcainians. But when he arrived, they had developed weapons and a small nation. When Gaelin ordered them to stand down, They ripped his head off.

They then dumped the Narcainians into a secluded area in Mexico, where they could be watched constantly. It was called Section 6. But with the Narcainian minds developing faster than the humans could, there was no telling what they could do.

On this specific class, the assasin was trained in stealth and agility. it has the power to maintain long distances and can run up to speeds of 80mph. With its Naracinian Diamondblade at hand, it can easily take down a group of enemies, in a matter of seconds.


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11-23-2009, 04:39 AM#2
AnemicRoyalty
My comment that it's too monotone still stands; you really need to break up the unsaturated black on this guy.

Also, don't forget that you need an ingame shot!

EDIT: also, if you don't attach the screenshot to the first post, it won't appear as the preview image.
11-23-2009, 06:47 AM#3
Rising_Dusk
It's a very chaotic texture, and has tons of room for improvement. It's first and foremost as AR said, completely monotone. The oranges aren't in enough places nor do they offset the pitch blacks all over. You need better outlines and a third color, something to define the shape of the armor/body/legs/arms. Right now it's a black blob with orange eyes and an orange sword.

All images must be attached to the first post.
12-02-2009, 07:04 PM#4
Rising_Dusk
Been 10 days, and the image still isn't attached to the post. Think I will move this to WIP textures for further possible development.
12-03-2009, 03:42 AM#5
Fluff
I'm guessing that's team color on the horns? It has very little team color so you might try adding some more on the torso and legs to break up the black a bit.