Horror Cinematic

Hi!

This is my First Horror Cinematic :)
This is an AvP cineamtic....
This is in a big base.. ...The map is: 2,77 MB!
I hope you like it! ^^
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Sound:
www.Findsounds.com
Models:
www.hiveworkshop.com
Terrain:
www.wc3c.net
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Please read the submission rules and update accordingly (Player Number).

Also crediting sites is not enough, so hopefully you've done more than that in-game.

This is not a player map...
This is a Cinematic "Video" in WC3...
Just start the map, and watch the small "Video" :))
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I want to uplado my maps, don't cinematics, but my map too big
for uplaod it...

How many people can watch the movie at one time with the lobby? That's the number you place up there.

Sorry, my English know it's bad :(
Just downlaod the map, start the map, and just watch :)
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Moved to cinematic submissions.

Well, the map doesn't end, you just float around in darkness. You should fix that.

Other than that, I think this has potential. Unfortunately, the viewer has no idea of what is going on. Is the viewer a person? The movement of the camera doesn't suggest walking, just omniscient view bouncing around through walls. We should see our main character walking through. It's good that we don't see who is killing the dudes, I kind of like that. The problem is, there is no storyline foundation to hook the viewer in. It's just three people dying, and then the ship floats away. Does someone board the ship? Has the main character been left behind? I don't even know, because there is no main character. Who cares if the omniscient viewer gets left behind? It's not scary if that happens. You should try to introduce a main character and evoke some feeling through this person, because its not horrific otherwise. The primary means of doing this is having a horrific situation relate-able to the viewer. Some light-failures / flashing lights and added bells and whistles (a different death sound, maybe an alien roar) would make this a lot better, along with a more grounded plot.

Sry, this is my first "horror" Cinematic...
I don't know why do this the camera, why always go in the walls :(
I tryed to fix the cameras, but I can't :(
And this is not view of a person, just show what happening in the base...
And sry for the sounds..

Well I didn't mean to be too harsh, I guess I was. This is just constructive criticism, you don't need to apologize for anything. You also don't have to do anything I say. These were just suggestions that I think would make it a really good cinematic. Maybe you could fade in and out with darkness instead of having to move through the walls? It's up to you. I just realized that creepy music would make it really cool as well.

Ok :)
I have lots of cinematics, but for the all, I use some wow models, and wow musics ..
So, I don't know, can I upload, without delete it :D