Hydralisk Attack

Hydralisk attack..

An hydralisk was hiding with at least 3 other zerg and hes suprising a kind of soldier/marine.

I'm moving this away from the gallery section, it still needs a lot of work.
The perspectives don't make any sense at all, and you still need to learn some coloring. I don't understand what is going on in the background. And lastly, I can't recognize any lightsource (if there is any), the drawing is really flat right now.
And I'll may sound like an ass, but the hydralisk face is hilarious.

Its great that you work the entire field with color, but I would spend some more time rationalizing your decision making.

For example, what are those dark circles? I don't know what they are, and they don't really serve to further the composition outside of "oh look, variance."

Try working with flow more, as in, the flow of the picture. The hydralisk is planted smack dab in the middle and it stifles the entire thing.

And I'll second the hydralisk face being pretty funny lookin'. Just keep workin and you'll do fine.

I would imagine the three visible dark spots would correspond to the "3 other zerg". In other words, at least three unidentified, burrowed monsters. I suppose they are meant to add to the feeling of ambush and the futility of the situation.

Certainly seems more than just variance to me, anyway.

Okay you have conceptualized the importance of said blobs and what they represent, but the compositional elements still stand, it doesn't matter if they were changelings or protoss or what, the fact of the matter stands that they don't server to further the composition.

P.S. If the viewer doesn't understand what it is, its probably because its unclear in the picture.