Beta Test of a rpg map

This is a beta version of a RPG map made by my brother, with 6 quest completed. If you have any comment about the dialogus, the story, the triggers ,the cinematic and the bugs plz e-mail to

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The cinematic is OK. 14 quests , 8 new heros, New background music, abilities, special effects, 14 quests, items and mini games will be added later.
As this is a beta version the hero will be revived when he get killed :>

The small ghouls are kinda cool and I like the double click selecting(didn't even think about how to do that...thanks). But that first town needs to be changed. A bunch of buildings that are all out of scale and scattered...maybe I'm being too picky, but it just doesn't look like a real town to me. Also one more negative thing, and I'll shut up...It didn't seem to be anymore like an RPG than warcraft is. It needs more interaction, instead of hard coded actions and cinematics. And ofcourse you need a good story...not just "Hey, there's some bad guys...lets kill 'em". I'm am also working on an RPG that has a lot of things I have never seen...so I may be a little over critical on these points. He still has a lot to do, so I'm sure it will be cool in the end.

Break.

Hi! I am the writer of this map. Thanks for your comments.

This is my first RPG map, so many things are not good enough....

For the town, I admit it look strange. Well, actually I am not sure how a town should look like....Should I add some building to the town or just to rearrange the buildings? I think I should add more characters to the town, How do you think about this?(Possible NPCs: thief, information dealer...)

For interaction problems, I think it is mainly because this is only a beta version, only the main quests are completed......I 'll added some side-quests, different ways to solve the quests, the shops to equip the hero, and some interaction between players....If I misunderstanded your comment please tell me.

As I don't want to let people know my story yet all dialogues are temporary, I promise I'll change ALL dialogues when I finished the triggers and doddads(This is part one of the whole story, I'll start working on Part II in April.)

I'll try to improve the appearance of the town and add more interactions ASAP. If you have any other comments feel free to say( My english is poor so my words may be inappropriate)(Is there any bugs found? Is the tips for the quests enough?)

p.s. For people who haven't tried this game, It is the beta version of a cool RPG game, with some cool quests and awesome cinematics, Fun to play and very strategic................. :ggani:

i played it only once until the ghoul-waves stopped, then I had to stop playing >_< ill test it again in the next days