Im making (Or Trying) a Campaign.

Im making (Or Trying) a Campaign.
(I don't need any help for this but I need to know if the story is a bit Good.

When the game starts you will find yourself in front of an rather Old man. (Didn't thought of a good name yet) He tells you that years after the Batle with the Burning Legion most buildings of the world still been destroyed and stuff. (This Old man is a Hero) When some Footmans and other Human forces searched for survivers in a old village (Night Elfs didn't survived those years, remember most of them were more then 10 000 years old.) After hours of searching. A man (This Old man now) found a baby girl but the strangest thing is. She had blue skin. The Man brought her to his house and...well been like a father to her.

After 10 years the man named Lord Archor sended the girl to a Barracks (A huge barracks that was made on the ruins of Dalaran. (Dalaran, Lordaron, Kalimdor and all the others doesn't got anything to do with the story) She was trained there as a Archer. (A hero ofcourse)

After 7 years she got a letter from Lord Archor to go to a certain place. (Nothing special doesn't got much to do with the story)
There the campaign begins. The girl will meet with Lord Archor once again. The first and second level are tuturials. In the first level you will learn to fight with your hero and get something to know about your hero. The second level is about the buildings.
After you know all that you will be taken to the base of Lord Archor. You will stay there for a while...Well until you get attacked by remaining Undead Forces. Your hero and Lord Archor can't handle them all so you need to escape.
Level 3.
Escape from the Undead. The Entire land is captured by the Undead.
New Hero : Lord Archor level 10...Good enough.

When you finally escaped from the Undead (You finished the level) you will find two roads. Both leading to a way that none knows. Lord Archor and the girl will take both a diffrent way.

Level 4.
You will only control Lord Archor and a small of his team. (Nothing special)
You walk right in the trap of the enemy. At the end of this level, when you killed all the Undeads from the land a stronger Undead being arrives. Lord Archor will be killed by him. With his last strenght he sended a "Scout" to the girl.
The scout will tell that Lord Archor died in a battle with a powerfull Undead being.

The girl would seek revenge for Lord Archor but she isn't strong enough she is sure. If that creature got the power to kill her master. Then she isn't a match for that creature.
After a while you will encouter an other Hero.

Total you will play as 5 hero's. You will never play all 5 of them. Most you will play with is 3 or 2. (It's pretty logical that you can't play all 5 of them because Lord Archor dies at the third level :))

You will play with 2 races. (Haven't thought of a name yet) The "Girl" (Don't got a name yet) will have her own race. (Half-Elf) and one of the other hero's will have something else...Don't know what yet...

There will be NO new models (Im still all of this. I don't understand EVERYTHING of Triggers yet...Most of it I do though)

Well...That would be the story...Im long from finished. I don't need any help. I just want to know what you think of the story line.

Well, i think that its a nice storyline...
If you need help, i'm here...

Trigger here. I'm actually in a few campaigns, but i'm not busy.

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