Map storyboards

This is a map i made for a new cinematic of mine.
But I want your opinion on the terrain, doodads, etc. etc.
There is one shot in particular I want to be judged. chekc the one attached here:

BTW...is there any way to make a dome? I can't think of anything the would work.



http://www.wc3campaigns.com/forums/s...5&pagenumber=1

[edit] check page 2 of the link for the pic. there's over 15 pics in the post, it's the last one

I kinda need you guys to click the link and DL the pics and judge them. That's all

there is a way to make a dome type thing but it wont be a enclosed dome. it would be like an arch.

huh..... i did what i could. Check the last shots i posted on there. That was my half-assed attempt at a dome

o ur the guy that made that tight *** thing with the arches. now that i look at u picks i remember u now.

No other posts execept u and me.. :(
oh well. If i get a good dome idea i'm gonna post more pics tomarrow once i modify the one i got now.
tight a**?
really?


Come on. At least 50 ppl have seen this. I'd like to see more psts from ppl other than me and skyline

Well i believe i have a new idea for the plot:
There are more people meeting the leader. The assassin kills every1 except the leader(and the guard who escapes). The cloaked man comes in and talks to the little NE man. He takes control of his body(he still has his human body, but can control the NE man). When he meets with the assassins who kill the pladin, troops, etc. etc., Instead of giving them their bounty, he kills them. the man marches the possessed man and himself down the corridors to the palace at the other end of the map(the whole thing is on another map.) When he ramsacks the palace, his necromancers perserve the corpses and marches on to the crypt of his brother.[The claoked man, the NE man, and the fllen mage in the crypts are all brothers. When they strayed form their teachings into necromancy, the NE had an assassin kill the mage and he exiled the cloaked man.] They march onto the massive(and i hope to be a graveyard with a little more interest than a flat piece of land and tombs.) they come to the well decorated crypt of their brother. The NE man, now possesed, and the cloaked man(name unsure), walk up to two seperate sides with circled of power. They summon the fallen mage(this part's gonna be a pain in the ***. i'll need to make the crypt desctructable and have a bunch of custom spells). When he rises, he walks forth to them. The NE man still has his soul in him and cries out and mutters his feelings on what his brothers are doing when the cloaked man lets his control over him down. The both are pissed at him and kill him. the two necros take the body of their brother(the dead one) as their own(they actually leave their body and both psees him, you'll see why later). The now one entity marches toward the fornt of the graveyard where there is a small mound that over looks the massive graveyard...


The plot obviously need stweeks so i'll post when i think of somthing else. The whole paladin crpa is basically gone as i told it to u. he's still there though, for another purpose...