My upcoming cinematic progress

Im working on a cinematic and this is what i have so far.


NOTE: IT IS NOT IN GOOD QUALITY FORM! PLZ TAKE NOTE THIS IN ITS REEEEEEAAAAAALLLYYY EARLY STAGES.

Whoah! Thats alot of special effects! It slowed down on my comp (P4 2.8 ghz, Radeon 9700 Pro)! Is this the project you PMed me about?

yea it is :)

soooooooooooooo what do u think?

I PMed you with alot of thoughts! Im gonna reskin the shade to make it look really awesome!

BTW I have a skin for the paladin thats really cool!

post it in the skins section...

woops posted wrong file :bgrun:

Here is an updated version of the intro....it needs a bit more smoothing out i know...i dont think any more special effects :bgrun:

I need your comments!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! (If your out there DK i could sure use some)

1) Sky should be darker.
2) There should be fog or somethin'.
3) Too brief (well, it's meant to be anyways)

Not half bad for a start. Keep it up!

PS: I'm not DK, but I'm just gonna rate it anyways ;)

Thanks Mech...your my hero :P

It's the tiny details that make the difference:

-Try to center your dreadlord on the platform
-add more details to the overall landscape
-Try to make your entire place look symmetrical, and not only doodads on the southern part.

Work on this and resend it! :)

thx DK! im workin right on it!:D

I didn't like the terrain... at all.

Otherwise, it's good. Add some fog and that kind o' crap.
Go easy on the special effects.