Alright, I played it. There were still other grammatical mistakes, but most of them weren't horrible, the worst one being that the ancient elf said that something like "The dark lord should take the orb!" when it the best thing to have said was "the dark lord has taken the orb!". Saying should means that it will occur in the future, the dark lord is able to take it, or that he must take it. The main distracting thing in the dialogues were people's laughs though, as they still needed to be translated (ja ja ja= ha ha ha, because J's don't make the correct sound in English, same with hi hi hi, should be he he he)
But, enough nitpicking about the dialogue. The terrain was good, sometimes I sat there looking at it when I should have been saving the world. For some reason I found the green elf sheep extremely cool. I was surprised that you didn't make custom heroes, though I don't think it was a bad thing. Who translated it? The readme said that it was made by Mititikan, but translated by "me", which didn't help. There were many cinematic scenes, I liked how when going into new areas you would do a cinematic sweep, it gave a nice feel.
So, overall, I liked it. | 
