FORSAKEN new cinematic

here is my FORSAKEN preveiw thing....there might be a few typos but anyway plz watch and tell me what u think...thx to Buster for hosting itdownload here

Well since im the first one I will point out the obvious as well.

Cons

1. uhh change the loading screen from melee to custom (unless your making custom spells :ggani: )
2. DO NOT DO THE TEXT THE WAY YOU DID IT! I found that I was constantly rereading parts over and over again. Just start a new message ok?
3. Text went a bit fast and #2 didnt help either
4. I know its very hard but there was nothing new or inovative and maybe your just saving it.
5. Put an end trigger please!

Pros
1. Good Camera Movement
2. Good Timing with the music
3. Interesting story line I will be looking out for it.

--I will change the loading to screen in my next release this is just kind of a preveiw of whats to come...this cinematic tell the basis of the story line..

--I will also fix the text ...i have been getting complaints about that from more then one person

--as for it being new and inovative probaly not but i hope to accomplish some new things that havent really been done before when this is completed...i am still experimenting with some stuff and writing the story so i am not near done...

--there should be a end trigger..i dont know why it wouldnt work? hmm

--well thx for all the feedback this was like a ideal reply ,more like this would be great...this was exactly what i was looking for...it helps to give me direction...thx alot

plz guys more feedback

I'll watch it after school...

And Shooter, you HAVE to rate the cons before the pros, ah? :////

id say that it is pretty good man.. a decent 4/5. just a tad short:(

other then that.. very good w/ the exception of the text that went a little fast for some ppl(not me.. i read a a perfect 10th grade lvl..lol.. i jsut spent the time reading and not really looking at the scene..)

very nice.. jsut increase the length man..

lol i knew some1 would say that. I was jus typin the bugs and i thoght I should add some pluses too so I jus added cons to the top :D

well thx for the replys...i hope to finish a full episode soon...

This is very good, your timing is great but I do think you could add more doodads on the path and I think your camra goes through a tree once or twice, but I'm not sure... other then that make soon so I can watch it:D (but not so soon that its ruff)

umm.. demanufac... you wouldnt mind if i used the same music as you do you? i opened your map to look at some stuff and i happened to listen to the Howard Shore song... very nice.. anyways.. id just like to ask your premission since i got it from your map..lol

FUNG the Howerd Shore song can be found in the Lord of the Rings soundtrack (I would have to listen to it again to see which one) so if your ever looking for music like it there tons in the two CD's that are out, you could find them on kazaa or buy them like me if you want a lot of choces

By the way with a name like yours your sig sould say "All shall love me and despair!" it would be funny :ggani:

i know its from lord of the rings.. but i got it form his map and he used it first.. and i didnt want to use it if he was uncomfortable w/ it... (im just thoughtful like that..lol)

lol...:ggani: but gl on getting the right music!

yeah sure go ahead...o btw that particular1 cant be found on kazaa...i converted that 1 to wav format and took the last 3/4 of the song and deleted it to save file size( file size is a must to save in the forums considering they only allow 1/2 mb attachments), then i converted it back to mp3...so its only like a minute and 25 seconds long or something...but if u want go ahead and use it, i didnt write the song so i cant tell u not to use it

ehh.. does Kaza cost money? cuz if it does.. then i dont want to get it..

ITS A LOW BUDGET FILM!!!

no, it doesn't cost anything, you just have to dowload it.