Newbie Screenshots (Rate me to help me out)

Hey, Well.. I'm a newbie to this. Kind of.. I've worked on War3 maps half a year ago but became interested in other things.

But, Bordem has lead me back to War3 mod making.

Anyways.. I have started my own mod.

But also I have screenshots of a map. I want to ask how i'm doing..? I've spent months on the whole map making thing but it has been awhile. Anyways.. This is one of my most recent maps.

Rate from 1-10, be honest. And tell me how to improve.

attach it...

... :D

Err.. I'm trying to.. it's just not letting me..

-Um, I can't even host it on other sites, it's a zip of 4 .tga screens. Kind of big.

I'm trying again.. 0_o

http://www22.brinkster.com/simonzakt...13252simon.zip

http://www22.brinkster.com/simonzakt...13231simon.zip

Err.. Sorry..
The screens are not even that good srry for the wait.

-EDIT- Just Save Link As... As for the others. I'm to tired to get any more up. If you guys give me a passing rate I'll post a couple more.

And if anybody wants me to help out with a mod, please ask me as I'd really like to help with one to give myself a job and more experience so my own mod can be cool. :D

Rating: pass :dance:

It's a little tricky to tell what your terraining looks like overall, since these screenies are pretty narrow.

I guess if you could take eagle-eye shots and post the whole screen (at a reduced size) as a .jpg, that'd be ideal.

dont load them as .tga's. Convert them to .jpg so ppl can see it. Welcome to wc3campaigns.

://// I'm back with a couple more.. they suck..
But a 1-10 rating would be nice. Also, can you tell me what's the problem..? And how I could improve?

:ggani: Okay..

0_o

Not bad. You could use a little more raising/lowering land to make it look more natural. But not bad for a beginner. GJ.

Okay, I'm gonna stop for now.

I'd like to get some ratings. I know they suck.. but how much?

You have not seen SUCK, these are actualy VERY good for a noobie, however you still have a long way to do, first utalize all types of doodads, play the first human mission and look at how they use doodads and terran, them more time you spend the better you will become dont overuse just one type of doodad/building and as baby said change your hights more often

:D Thanks
Actually.. I thought I was raising and lowering to much.
I leveled some places. Okay, Now I won't need to worry about that. :////

Yeah you should look at the blizzard maps. They are actually very detailed and the terraining is really good. But since you want us to rate you, then I'd give you a 6/10. Good for a newbie and you show promise as a terrainer. Keep it up!

My standards are very high, as most people know. Your screenshots don't show enough though, show some landmarks on your terrain, or something that not everyone has done. 4/10. Which is good for a newb, with my standards.