Cataclysm

The orcish horde begin to slowly turn back to their barberious ways, and a new threat arises. With their new mode of power and intellect, a great warrior arises amongst the gnoll race. This warrior Gnok'darn, an overseer of the advancing gnoll race, appoints three fierce warriors at his side, the warden Hernut, a brute Frenj and an assassin Grune.

Naturally the humans over the look the possibilitie of this threat, and as this world attempts to heal from the reign of chaos, a new reign shall arise. The feeble gnolls shall rule unchallenged.

The significence of the orcs over throwing thrall is great. Their great warchief abolished for the horde. Thrall was grown up as a human, thus he contained human thoughts. Peace was a human thing, the orcish race are tied to war, for all of history... they shall be the orcish enemy.

As the night elves return to their sleep the scourge begin mobolize and complete their mission, with or without the help of the demon leiutenants.

You should really think about tying that in with the story some how, not just talk about the orcs and humans a paragraph or two, then all of a sudden hit people with one sentence of night elves and scourouge. other than that very well done.

lots of errors there.....

1.) Orcs went back to their Shamanistic way, not barbarious.
2.) The Orcs don't mind peace... i mean all they were looking for was a place to call home... in Azeroth During Thrall's rule.. And they only wanted war because they were corrupted by Mannoroth.
3.) Grom killed Mannoroth so they are no longer corrupted.
4,5 & 6.) The whole Night Elf paragraph.

7.) What is the plot? It was never actually stated....


My opinion is that any story culd be great if done propeerly with touch-ups... u shuld redo a lot of it and actually giv a plot... then it would make sense and be more interesting..

The orcs in warcraft 3 are peaceful, but some dislike it. They live for war, so they overthrow thrall (He's dead).

The human's are a fallen kingdom, even in kalimdor, the creeps are rising, and rise they shall. As great lords they shall rule, and Jaina proudmoore is dead (Woohoo!)

The night elves are asleep oncemore, so they are no threat and their species are of no concuiquence.

The undead are mobolizing, to the tree of life. The lich king's master plot is finally carried out, and his chief death knight, Arthas shall see to it that none fails!

The gnolls traditional ways are abandoned. Fights are now illegal. The great overseer must see to it that no fights are within the ranks, and the gnolls save their energy for greater battles! Greater battles than even the burning legion!

The demon warriors have arrived, they call themselves the ffringe, they are only 8 in number, but their power challenges even Sargeras...

The Fringe start out as great merceneries, apparently the warden Hernut summoned these huge beasts... the gnolls wished to use them as faithful servents, but demons are no servents, they strive for greatness, and the gnolls now face their employees.

An allied organization of 12 men is organized, consisting of those from the horde, the alliance, the scourge and the creeps. These are elite warriors known as the chamber of blood. These warriors don't take kindly to anyone, their goal is to destroy the demons covertly, and anyone who gets in their way shall be removed.

There are 6 forces all at war, ever since the horde abandoned their peace loving ways, their temperory truce is broken... but an even greater force is still to arrive, as the armies charge to their death on the hills of Azeroth, the sky burns up and a portal to another realm is opened, a dark realm... a battlefield made ny Sargeras himself, to test the worth of the warriors, as it is his goal to take down his lost titan brothers...

I won't be back for like a week, so feel free to discuss or ask anything... I'll get back to you... and if anyone would like to help (Particularly with triggers and models) that would be great... this is a great undertaking, and Cataclysm shall better the crude efforts of the sovereign blizzard itself...

okwe'll think about that, but I do see shadoworc's point, and your point as well, ill think of somthing convienient to write.:p

err there is still one major problem with that story... the orcs would never overthrow Thrall...... the orcs are far mor noble than most ppl wuld expect.... and besides if it wernt for Thrall they would all be dead now.... they would never have escaped the humans in the first place and would have most likely been killed... err not to mention Thrall is not just a Warchief but a King.

-*L*, yeah they'd never kill Thrall.
-Thrall's title is 'Warchief'. He's the leader of the entire Horde.

*Begins to say something but decides to not to* :rolleyes:

Why don't you do something more original, without trying to mess about with Blizzard's heroes and setting? Do something like Antioch did for StarCraft- new heroes and all, with new threats, but without spoiling the universe it's set in.:cool:

I concur with Mr. Magic entirely.

Take the universe and blend your story to it, rather than vice versa.

But that's my oh-so-humble opinion, I suppose.

Well, Ogrim Doomhammer assassinated the former warchief to become the king...why not someone kill Thrall? Thrall dies off in my campaign...here is the intro for my campaign-


The Child of Stone

Forty-three years after the destruction of the World Tree, peace was not a rare sight amongst the denizens of the eastern lands…peace was not even that rare in the western lands. The powerful orcs crushed black dragons, renegade armies, and the remaining demons: whilst the humans and night elves slaughtered the gnolls, murlocs, and satyr. Times were rich and tranquil, but with secrets leaving the shadows, the infrastructure is sure to falter under the burden of corruption.

Under the leadership of Thrall, the noble orcs returned to their roots and achieved an honorable peace. When the war chief died, a ruthless Far Seer named Malmax enslaved Thrall’s top generals, succeeding the war chief as the Master of the Horde. A high mage of New Dalaran uncovered documents directly linking Malmax to a resource traffic ring, which had the primary goal of fueling a growing orcish army.

The orcs were not alone in their corruption; Balran Proudmoore, the second grandson of Jaina and the heir to the Throne of Azeroth, was found to be assisting Deathwing in his raids on dwarven lands. The first grandson of Jaina and the holder of Lordaeron, King Malrius the Lightbringer, was slain by taurens as he tried to free the Lich King, Ner’zhul, from his icy throne.

Widespread corruption had devastated the spirits of both the orcs and humans, while tearing away at the hope and resolve of the Night Elves. On the year 44 PWT (Post World Tree), two orc servants of Malmax gave birth to a boy who was named Sarunji, old orc for Child of Stone. His name was deserved both physically and spiritually; he was born with a skin defect that gave him a very unique look, and was raised with an iron will that would break for none…especially not Malmax. Fellow Orcs rejoiced at Suranji’s birth; an event viewed as a gift from the Storms to signify a pillar of strength in a world of rot, created by Malmax and the corrupt humans.

Suranji’s childhood was not something many would wish upon their enemies. At the mere age of one, Malmax raided Ankromar, killing Suranji’s parents as an example to those who spoke against him. At the young age of 7, Persil Bloodshard, a member of Malmax’s Zurajin Alliance, called forth a massive blizzard to wreak death and pain upon Suranji’s home and loved ones. Working towards a power in line with honor and justice, and merely 16 years of age, Suranji found only one answer to the restoration of his people…Gulbrik Bloodhoof, son of Cairne and master of the Bloodhoof Clan.

What happens when Blizzard releases an expansion, book or item that continues the WC universe and renders your work inconsistent and (to fans that like stuff that makes sense) thus useless? O_o

I've said it before and I'll say it again- something original, set within the confines of the WC universe, is what most people prefer. Then again, most people attempt to just take it into their own hands and mess it up without listening, so go for it if you're thinking of flaming\maniacally arguing with me. :rolleyes:

And, uh, Persil is the name of washing machine powder over here in Britain. :p

Ogrim Doomhammer slew Blackhand because Blackhand was a tool of Gul'dan, and neither Blackhand nor his master had any regard for the Orc race itself, only for the empowerment of themselves.

Magic, truly I don't know. I'm making this campaign molded to my vision of the WC universe, and I am sure Blizzard's is different. If they release something that runs my campaign over then I will work in a different period of time for my next one. I work for the fun of it anyways, and to give other people a unique gaming experience.

Also-
Zedric, I know, but it was still the killing of the warchief and a succession.

ntm the fact that none of the orcs really cared what happened to BlackHand did they? I mean if they didnt want Orgrim to lead them i'm sure they wuld of killed him too......

But if Thrall were to be murdered the Horde would be split in half........ and a huge war wuld arrise just between the Orcs and the Orcs if you know what i mean...