My First Movie

Hi guys! I'm making a new movie and it is my first. I am taking my time to not make any mistakes. It is all working and in my eyes pretty good.

I haven't actually finished it yet, but almost have the first "act" done. Would you tell me what you think of it?
Constructive Critisism Only

Anyway, I hope you like it, and yes it is protected.

Download it Here

wow, this place is getting full of new cins :D
anyway, I'll look at it and give you some comments on it!

and don't be afraid, we always give constructive criticism! No one flames/spams eachother here! :D

~ Nuladion

i cant access it, cuz it's protected, and dont spas out at people -Cough FatNakedUglyGuy- Cough!, lol j/k but sum comments r so mean :( " dont takes this the wrong way but u suck at terrain" j/k~!

if you cant open it how do you know??? Anyway, play it like a normal map. I am updating the download to include the rest of act 1.

--needs better terrain
--also turn cinematic mode on...that was the first time i have ever seen some1 attempt to pull off a cinematic like that
--add alot more to the terrain...terrain is a huge element...if underestimated your cinematic will suck...Terrain is what gives you that feel for what is happening in the story...the better your terrain is the more u will connect with the story and the better your cinematic will be...
--Also i couldnt tell what your story was because there were no transmissions...so fix that...

good luck with the rest and keep trying

id idnt say ur terrain sucks... i was saying that Fatuglyguy said that to me cuz he thought my arena was a town, i didnt say that to u and how do i open it w/ protection?

.Actually, there are transmissions, but you must turn subtitles on.

-I made this map so I could pratcise my terraning, so of course it needs work, and I am developing it more and more as I progress more.

YOU DONT OPEN IT. Put it in your map directory and play it in WC3

--Edit--
New update is ready.

I WILL CUT YOU!!!!!! lol.. and no.. im not playing.. dont let me catch you on the streets!!!!

what do you mean my comments are mean.. i give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.. its all good here.. i dont flame or spas.. come on now..(next years awards.. nominate me for most critical.. my friends think im way to critical too..lol)

its just you Jig.. your new here..lol.. im just helping you improve.. and you have... to a certain extent.. you cant say youd be where you are now w/out all my comments..lol

has anyone even watched my movie yet?

If you need someone to terrain for you, PM me, I would gladly help you. If you wanna see my skills on terraining, select my "Revenge of the Elves" sig to see my screenshots, I'll watch your cinimatic soon, very busy now :D

NOTE: You must accept what you ask for... Every people did accept this type of feedback, so do I, Although it will hurt our feelings, but suggestion makes perfect :ggani:

2 things...

first of all, i dont want help with terraining. This map is being made to help me to learn how to terrain well through practising.

Second of all, why would you want the unportected version? Im not afraid people would steal my triggers, but my map protector comprosses maps when you protect them.

Ok first of all WE DONT STEAL CINEMATICS HERE! You only protect a map on b.net like tower d's and stuff like that. If its a rip off your map EVERYONE will know it. Now for the review.
-DONT USE FADE OUT AND BACK IN. Use fade out over x seconds useing w/e and a seperate action fade in over x seconds
-Whats the end? After they got to the magical gate and walked in nothing happend. I think a trigger got messed up
-They just teleport through the wall?... ok...
-The camera sorta threw the mood of if you were tyring to have it be ambient with it going so fast.
-Dont always have the camera at the overhead angle locked to the guy. Use the offset part of the action
-The triggers were pretty good.

I know why these comments are hurting :ggani:
Because... I hate to say that
Just unprotect your map