The Lost Paladin Cinematic

http://www.geocities.com/destruction_maps/

This is the Lost Paladin Preview WebSite!

Please say its Good!

u dont need 2 threads for this

I am so sad... My Lost Paladin sucks... my 1st map... :( :(

Don't worry. The first map also sucked for mine. Even if you have 2100 posts, you shouldn't spam it in one day.

If you want attention, you'll get it. You can also ask people for help :D

Ok, sry i m abou to get kinda preachy. ;)

Here is a little advise on being "accepted" at these forums. This is gathered from a couple recent people who didnt really do much to benefit the cinematic forum and who eventually left or got banned.
Despite me using the word accepted there really is no day of initiation to these forums or point of acceptance; it happens from the beginning. I am just saying this to help you stay around longer and help the cause of cinematics. Like mechsheep said dont try to get attention through spamming. This will only hurt your image. Please stay away from empty posting. (aghh, i sound like a mod) Anyway, goodluck on your cinematics and sorry for being kinda preachy but we really need some more quality posters around here. :D
(we really need some forum posting guidelines);)

That´s not the worst nor the best cinematic (preview) i´ve seen...

1. The whole thing looks pretty pointless, there just is this one guy who goes around checking if his help is needed, why? Why would he think some one would need his help right then? There seems to be very little of an actual plot there.

2. The animation - lock bodypart facing triggers, you seem to be forgetting to also use the "animation - reset bodypart facing " trigger, making, for example, the peasants head turn to unnatural poses when his gaze is following the paladin guy

3. You also yourself bend the paladins head to face his back at one moment.

4. The Cameras are nice.

5. I´ve seen a lot worse scenery too.

Ok ok... I t was my 1st map.. There are many triggs, and I only know 10 of them.. But now, I know 30 of them. Making me 2 times better. Well.. better go make a better cinematic.. and thanks for your support.

Only one last question. How do you make the Camera Shake?:D

It was all very unrealistic... Who says: I've killed them, but now I cant see because of the wind... then he walks in to some trees, I doesnt make much sense, But the technical part of the cinematic was ok... needs more imagination tough

accually it makes u 3 times better, ia m gonna go watch it now and give u my thougjts!

How can I add a Pic on a Map? Like on the start... Just to make the movie look more... you know.. :gsmile:


Plzz post Here

Camera shaking:
Camera -- Sway Camera

The pic at the beginning:
Look in the Cinematics for Dummies-thread! Look for DK's post for splash screens/custom fade filters!


Hope that helps you out!
I haven't watched ur cin yet, I will do so later today!

~ Nuladion