Elite Forces Cinematic Completed

Wow... what a rush... entire cinematic in 1 night (except some of the skins)... course i'll just sleep on the plane i have to catch sometime this morning... anyways... here

it says i used to much bandwith today... so it'll be available to download eventually. (2 hours from right........now)

Ok, It is interesting and could have been cool;
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Nice modells,
Cool Skins.

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Bad CameraWork.
Repedetive.
Spawning of units visible.

But as you said you made it in one night. But the modells were cool, some more story and plot would be nice ;)

Yeah, eventually, there will be a game right after that. And I had to go to oklahoma (where I am now, on a dial up connection, on a laptop with a really messed up screen)

Well all i can say in the pros is that you had good skins. The cameras were poor at the best and there were many bugs. Even though you only had one night to finish this i think it could have been alot better. Just keep trying you can get better.:D

Errrr...
I doubdt the sniper was supposed to just sit still and keep shooting the aliens for an eternity until the "create aliens" trigger made the game start lagging... ?
Also, give the poor marines a little less health, it was kinda boring to watch them kill the alien waves for an eternity, being shot at all the time without dying.
If you would make the cameras better, and add some cool stuff it´s be ok.

If you wanna get some suggestions PM me your e-mail and i´ll send you a couple of mini cinemas where i show some of my ideas. :D

Here is the note I was supposed to add after the credits:

Director

The camera man was the only one who survived this mission. A week later, he was fired.

Edit: I never actually watched the finished product... I had that little time.

Edit2: How do you get sounds to play in cinematic mode?

I didn´t even get to the credits, it´s bugged, i was stuck watching an endless loop of camera movements and protoss spawning....