| 07-13-2003, 05:07 PM | #1 |
Guest | I'm not that good a cinematics so i'm starting w/ sumthin easier. But here is a nice story up for grab: Jhon is a policeman who lives in "Euviva" meaning the city of happiness (or something like that). Euviva is a utopia, a perfect city, where everyone is happy. But one day, an inhabitant turns crazy: "You think you have the perfect life! But you do not, you dont know what are behind the walls of this city!". Jhon starts to question himself, he starts to have dreams. One day he comes to a decision, having really witnessed and understood how the people in Euviva lived: they like robots, slave to routine. He makes an escape with his friend in the police, resccues the crazed inhabitant from the prison, and discovers that, behind the city walls, is the worst thing that could ever exist: Hell, everything is dead or rotting, no sign of life. Jhon has a job to do: Distroy Euviva, and restore the world to its original not so perfect, but stable world. I already started the teraain if someone wants it. The only requierment is an understanding of the philosophy behind this story. And I noe you all have great minds. ![]() |
| 07-13-2003, 10:44 PM | #2 |
Guest | .....i think i saw that exact same episode of twilight zone on scifi channel. Nice try but lacks originality. |
| 07-19-2003, 05:09 PM | #3 |
Can You post a picture of the terrain. Thanks :D . |
| 07-19-2003, 07:26 PM | #4 |
Actually, that story resembles Ferienheit 451 more than anything else. -Insaniteus- |
| 07-20-2003, 02:00 AM | #5 |
With a little bit of The Giver mixed in. lol! |
| 07-21-2003, 05:17 PM | #6 |
wow, sound just like "The Wind On Fire" books |
| 07-21-2003, 05:26 PM | #7 |
edit: nevermind |
