Screens of my first Cinematic

well its a cinematic, not ready yet, but here are some screens from the first movie scenes...hf:

well, here the next 2 ones:

as i already [email protected]...not bad!

well i would like to see a few more comments on these screens...do you like them or not? what sucks what looks good?

something like that perhaps....its still in progress so i will change things if they seem to be good...-.-

That's really nice for a first cinematic.

The second screenshot is a bit empty for a city. Judging by the tower though, it's an abandoned place. If it is, I suggest add some fungus and mushrooms and other wild things :D

I hate the second screen. A city angle should be wider and more distant and man made terrain should be straight and flat.

For the first Cin ITS GREAT


EDIT:
MY 200 POST:w00t w00t

:D :D :D

bery nice

ok, i will spend some work on the place from pic 2, u're right it looks a bit empty, but the size is fine, because this isnt a real place where u talk or sit down or do stuff like that, thats just a long place to walk (plz forgive me my bad english ://// ), just a way not more....here is a new screen, nothing special i guess, but lets see :

had to do this second post because i was only able to upload 1 pic in the last post ......its similiar to the first:

I like, I like

Heh, flaming torture racks, that's an original detail. The mushrooms don't fit at all with all of the death and decay around though, instead add some more rocks and possibly a COUPLE vines or Northrend trees.

-Insaniteus-

I like the mushrooms, they give it an nice surreal look, i like the look of those screens. :D

i like the mushrooms too, and im sure that any trees wont fit - when the cinematic is ready u wil see what i mean.....

new screens will be uploaded in a few days - atm im thinking about the triggers and the way the story should be told....that takes some time...

i liked the flowers the last one was too dark