Final Version Of Robot Marine I hope..

Here its my 2nd skin and its my only finished skin ever. I added dents and some bolts and i fixed some textures in alot of the areas. The gun is changed. Please what should i change or add?? I made the poll because more people reply on that. I MIGHT MAKE A COLORED VERSION MAYBE THOUGH. ITS NOT GONNA BE LIKE THE OTHER ONE ALSO :nono:

u cant attach and have a poll? here it is then
NEWEST VERSION OF THE SKIN FOR ALL YOU LAZY PEOPLE WHO DONT CHECK THE WHOLE THREAD BEFORE POSTING

Can you make his mouth lower or somthing. maybe it just the angle.

There's a mouth? Anyway, if you give it a voice, wont the face suddenly split open to reveal a mouth? Aside from that, really good skin.

PS - Your sig is a bit large.

It could use of some more bright parts and smoothing on the black edges.

Here I smoothened(If thats a word) the lines and i made it brighter. I added a colar thingy. I used the green from his eyes for the lights and gun.
EDIT: Tapek is this size better?

You can edit your last post so you don't double post.

About the skin: a lot btter now with the smoothing., the face stills strange tough and the orange thing edges look too 'dull'.

k, how to downlaod it?
oh and give him a face of somone else, I don't know, his face are weird

He's.. err.. very happy. Maybe make him frown or something? Also, it could use some more shading. Make it a bit more "shiny" and enhance the shadows. You might also want to reskin it's light texture. I forget what it is, but someone else has made a robot marine and done it, and it looks much nicer than white lights.

I agree. The orange just needs to to stand out a bit more. Burning the outer edges should work.

The face is... hmm... I dun know, needs to have a mouth.

Your metal isn't too convincing yet. Try setting your dodge tool to highlights and your burn tool to shadows, then shade it some more. Also, try to pull focus to the orange areas more.

Ok ok, i added a mouth do you like it? Crap i forgot to change the colors of the eyes to orange and smooth the face. I took ur guys advice and made the orange part stand out more. So how does it look?
PencilGod: Does the metal look better now i did exactly what you said.

You're definately on the right track with that version. Bit too much orange, if you ask me, but that's just a matter of color preference. Your metal's new shading gives it a much better look, much less "flat" looking. Why, though, are the undersides of his shoulderpads/shoulderarmorthingies lit up and orange?

You could shade the plates individually, that definitelly would look better (i say this by my own experience, worked geat with dragon scales).

wow, i really like that a lot. dont change it! dont listen to them! lol jk. great job