| 08-12-2003, 08:45 PM | #1 |
I am part of a team for sdmaps.vze.com and we decided to have a contest pretty much against me and AlienDwarf. Anyways, I have been working on this cinematic almost all yesterday and today. Its the Orcs raiding the Dwarves. I've STILL Got some bug fixes left, but its about done. Any ideas, comments, worship, excessuve drooling is always needed! So post what you think! Its unprotected, but the trigs are sloppy sooo.... |
| 08-12-2003, 10:50 PM | #2 |
I'll try it out tonight, will be back to you tommorow! |
| 08-12-2003, 11:10 PM | #3 |
Very good camera movement. the path to the dwarf base could have been smoothed out a little. |
| 08-13-2003, 03:29 PM | #4 |
hmm.. lets see.... 1. start the cinematic w/ fade out over 0 secs.. it will start at pitch black like that, instead of fading out in the beginning 2. camera was okay.. but you still need to watch out for when it passes through trees and goes under the ground 3. terrain seemed really jagged.. i didnt personaly like it 4. some of the msgs were not timed right.. most were good... but there was one which had dead time in it.. 5 i personally dont like thet W3 R L33T stuff.. but hey, whatever floats your boat 6. coulda used some music 7. i didnt like the special effects that much. it seemed like you only used one kinda special effect.. which seemed kinda dull. |
| 08-13-2003, 04:31 PM | #5 |
I don't really like this cinematic very much. The terrain was a very jaggy, it wasn't very long, and I certainly don't like the "I OWN YOU" message at the beginning. I'll give this a 3/10. |
| 08-13-2003, 05:56 PM | #6 |
Why don't people like this terrain? I LOVE the look of it! This in like beta format (of course) and its SUPPOSED to be short. I would make it longer, but yeah. Personally I thought this cinematic is coming out great but I don't see what is wrong with it. "I OWN YOU" message will be changed, I am just foolin around. I don't like l33t speak, but I thought it was funny with keeping his army off Battle.Net. |
| 08-13-2003, 06:55 PM | #7 |
well..you posted it on the forums..so..they're giving you feedback... i thought it was ok..but you could cordinate the battle a little more |
| 08-13-2003, 08:06 PM | #8 |
The terrain contained just too many trees. I hardly saw any bushes and huge details. Also, the mountains were just squares, which is another downside. |
| 08-13-2003, 08:48 PM | #9 | |
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Actually, if you look at all the terrain in WE you will see not ALL the mountains are square ;) |
| 08-14-2003, 04:03 PM | #10 |
:D nice job i thinck but...... my cinematics own yours!!:guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: :guns: lol j/k actualy my cinematics suck darn you!!!! :cuss: |
| 08-14-2003, 04:08 PM | #11 |
i got a story!! 1 time me and my frind were playing a game when he got :guns: and i was :whoa2: and then i saw him spilled all across the flow lokin like this :knife: then i turned around i was :guns: then i was on the flow like this :knife: i was like :cuss: and they were :ggani: and of course was :bangH: and :cuss: and :reallyang so...... i ended up sneakig in to there base and :guns: them they were also :cuss: so i just killed em =D:knife: :hammer: |
| 08-14-2003, 05:01 PM | #12 |
ok after thrall says all that blah blah blah stuff and blows down the gate you should have a grunt say "*muble*note keep thrall off extacy! PURE COMEDY :D :D :ggani: :ggani: |
| 08-14-2003, 05:17 PM | #13 |
you really need to work on the camera angles to...like..make sure the battle is acutally in the scene |
| 08-14-2003, 06:44 PM | #14 | |
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@Pixies: I don't get what you are saying, please give me an example or something. @Shooter02: ADDED! lol |
| 08-14-2003, 09:27 PM | #15 |
i made you a picture...to explain |