Something I made...

It's just a cinematic about the Humans closing the Dark Portal on the Orcs homeworld. Nothing too special.

Try it out and tell me how you like it.

Note: I am aware that the scene transitions aren't too smooth and Kurdran vs Deathwing suxx0rz

Other than that I think it's alright :D

PS: This IS a TFT map.

Not bad! It was better than I expected, specially for a noob. The transitions were a little weird, with them shuttering, the terrain needed alot of work, but it's not that bad. Fix the stuff, get some music to it, make it longer, more complex camera angles, and you should have something worthwhile.

wow, that was good for a first cinematic. :D 7/10 for a first. the terrain was decent, just use more detail, the portal could have looked darker, maybe some blight etc. The dialogue was good i think i only saw one misspelling. this had a more proffesional feel than many first time cinematics out there. The dragon vs gryphon could have been done slightly better i think. they just circled and fought. :bgrun: the music fit but i think u should find something other than wc3 music. :D overall i think you can become a very good cinematics maker, just keep working.:gsmile:

Great work, especially for a first job. I'm just trying my first one now, and it's nowhere near as good as that...

Problems etc:

Some of the dialogue was a little 'lame', it just didn't seem authentic, especially when the dwarf returned from his scouting.

The fight between the gr and dragon wasn't well done, it didn't seem realistic. I;m not sure how you could improve it :/, i just know that it didn't fit in.

The part where the portal was being opened with the orcs, at the end, the camera did this weird up down, left right thing. Imo you should cut that, it seemed a bit out of place/odd.

Other than that, geat work, for a first cinematic, that was amazing :foot:

Very Good!
some of the camera movements were a little sloppy, the ones when ner'zhul opended the portals were really good

2 small things, i think the humans got out, but if they did then where did they go? and if they didnt what happened to them in outland?

second is i know deathwing died in the game, in one of the missions but other things say he escaped and then hes in DotD so he had to have escape.

erm....the world shakes
it's not bad, but the landscape is TOO empty, and the end is not really an end....not even an open end...it's not finished...*g* please do that, i want to know :ggani:

Pretty neat, something orginal! I like it!

Pretty neat, something orginal! I like it!

for the first time its awesome. i've seen better and im not uber cinematic maker myself. the dialogue was pretty lame, but its kind of hard for it to not be somtimes. overall 8/10.