Cinematic for my new campaign.....plz rate

hi guys. im a n00b to cinematics. i just maed this as a introduction to a new campaign, with there being a tutorial mission right beofre it explaing some storyline stuff. any suggestions are welcome, cuz i want to make this a good one.

please and thank you

Strange, someone voted bad but theres no downloads. . . . thats gay. I wish i could dl it but i gtg right now. Will do it tommorow.

needs more cam motion. it hurts to see tyhe same old thing over and over again

ya im nowhere near done. i still have to add some more panning and rotates. does anyone else think i should change the names? if anyone can come up with named for the Lich, Crypt Lord or Death Knight i would appreciate it. i kinda want to keep Nightsorrow.

okay... lets see now

-more camera movement/ angles.... kina boring w/ the same ones...it doesnt even seem like you moved them that much to begin w/. only a few degrees up or left and right from the default camera....
-find better music
-more special effects.. the one you had were... medicore.. make it more flashy.
-the ritual site could have more props... its just a blighted area w/ torches and ppl w/ animations... add...errr.... ehh.. im not sure.. not really big on undead ppl.
-was there a sky? wasnt paying much attention..
-the terrain was.. okay to look at. not exactly DK quality.. but i guess my expectations are just high d^_^b. anyways.. what kinda tile setting was it? i remember there being some plain barren land... yet there were trees around? most likely when there are trees, there is grass...(sorry if i missed it if there actually was grass)
-its a mountain right? so add snow. mountains=high altitudes=lotta snow.

the setting was lordearon(sp?) fall, and the mountain wasnt all that high (its more of a hill now that you mention it). i used a felwood sky, but ur right, u dont see it much. the mountain is supposed to have grass, but the artifact thingy (i still haven't named it) screwed the mountain up so its all blighty.

what do u mean special effects? i didnt think i used special effects, except maybe the thunder.

o well, the campaign is going nicely, so any other suggestions will help me in the long run.

I give it a 8/10.

Well. It needs a better thunder sound! PLEASE!!!

Or use multiple Thunder sounds.
The same sound suxs! But ok.

And, I'd love for you to create this campaign.
It wont be the best. But it will be something new :D

Just to add to what FatUglyNakedGuy said, try and improve the dialogue (spelling). Most of it wasn't really up to blizzard standard, and sometimes sounded a bit lame. Try using more colorful language :foot:

You could just remove the 'blight (large?)' ability from it. That will stop it from blighting the mountain, and you could add whatever blight youwant urself with the terrain editor.

Weird...I thought of some things for a parody (sry I don't know the names):

Horus'aman: I will be honoured wherever you place me, lord.

Nightsorrow: You're doing the toilets.

Horus'aman: Except that.

and:

Nightsorrow: For being late at the meeting, you must stay behind.

Bloodbane: Wahoo! Party!

try again

LOL!!!!1!!!!!!!
That's awesome and so frickin funny.
Thanks for the laughs

I find it a ok start, watch for spelling errors. Not bad if your a begginer though!:gsmile:

have them sacraficing orcs, humas, or nightelves, i think it would be funny if they needed to sacrafice a virgin archer tho :->:D

lol @ sikk, that was good, although the camera did annoy me abit good job though!:D