| 10-05-2003, 02:47 PM | #1 |
a vampire hunter type of guy made out of the high elf peasant. i might change the hair. Please give me comments and ways to make him better. I also know that i need to work on the torso it doesnt match with the head. |
| 10-05-2003, 03:09 PM | #2 |
You need to work on the torso to the extent of not making it look like someone took a sharpie and drew some muscles on there (hmmm, that's a commercial roduct right there...). anyway, my suggestion would be to look at any shirtless skin and check out how there muscle definition is done (like the keeper of the grove), and try to mimc that style. Dragging, burning smudging, and smearing will help alot to make a nice upper body. Also, what time period is this guy suppose to be?? he just looks alittle strange with his blue jeans. Finally, if you want to give your vampire hunter a better weapon, you could alpha the current one out, and replace it with any downloadable weapon, and attach it using triggers. he'd look pretty cool with a sword or axe in my opinion. |
| 10-05-2003, 03:19 PM | #3 |
The blue jeans look a bit outta place, maybe darken em a bit so they look more like medieval clothes. And the muscles need some work too. I see you alphaed out the axe head of the pick axe to make him have a stake :ggani: |
| 10-05-2003, 03:59 PM | #4 |
The stake is cool and relevent, but I doubt the attack animation will go with it. |
| 10-05-2003, 04:56 PM | #5 |
try removing the stake and if you can, remodel a new one, to look a bit better... Muscles need work and I think he should get a belt!! |
| 10-05-2003, 05:12 PM | #6 |
i darken the pants and changed the muscles like you said(i dont think they are quite right yet but they are better). I also put red paint under his eyes and changed the face a little bit. he is a little pale i think i might make him have a little bit darker skin. |
| 10-05-2003, 05:15 PM | #7 |
the muscles look great now!! Also, the paint looks crappy, might want to make it thinner, darker, more shaded, and come from the top of his eye to the bottom, like a crecent moon :D |
| 10-05-2003, 05:37 PM | #8 |
the only reason i did it like that is because it kinda looks like vamp teeth. Ill change it any ways though. |
| 10-05-2003, 06:29 PM | #9 |
this is a very minor change i just listened to kuramaRoze advice. |
| 10-06-2003, 03:32 AM | #10 |
that looks pretty good, you just need to work on the face wow thats really wierd, my name is ryan, and i ususally put 22 on the end of my aliases (i was born 2:22 on may 22 |
| 10-06-2003, 06:01 AM | #11 | |
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| 10-06-2003, 05:06 PM | #12 |
lol that's funny, and also, the vamp hunter NEEDS to be a "little" tanner, I mean...common! He's paler than a vampire. Also, use his advice and go with the torso markers...:ggani: |
| 10-06-2003, 05:14 PM | #13 | |
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The worst use of the english language yet... I think the latest one you posted (With the curved eye thingies) is pretty good, and the torso is much better than it was before, the only thing that needs work is those ridiculous ears... Oh and there is a little speck on the pick-axe that you missed when you alphed the thing, its kind of off the the up and right you'll see it floating.. |
| 10-06-2003, 07:40 PM | #14 |
i fixed his ears made him tanner and tried to get rid of the piece of axe but it is still there a little bit. |
| 10-06-2003, 07:44 PM | #15 |
Here he is with white hair tell me if it looks better or worse. |