| 05-10-2002, 02:24 PM | #1 |
Guest | Check out this fiction of mine. Stars a young elven ranger, a possible hero in my WC3 campaigns. Enjoy. :) http://www.samods.com/index.php?cmd=article&aid=60 Read here for glossary of terms. What do you think? :cool: |
| 05-11-2002, 08:16 PM | #2 |
Guest | I thought there was a bit of a contradiction with the anger of Glinn. Unless you are going to focus on this hypocritical anger and show it to be his downfall, I would leave anger out of it. It felt like the flow of the story should have been that when he got angry, someone took advantage of his weakness to trap him. Just my 2 cents though, Xygorn |
| 05-11-2002, 09:18 PM | #3 |
Guest | I don't get the story not clear |