Rate this please

ok here is a very very short cenimatic just because i have never actually made one before and i just figured i knew how. so i messed around and created a short one for fun. kinda funny but thats really up to you. basically i just want opinions on everything in this very very small map. how do you guys feel about the terrain and how do you guys feel on the cenima and everthing else you can think of. also does anyone know how i can make my mountains look better...they look a little wierd. tips any one?

i tried to emphasize on how short this is because it takes you like 2 secs to download it and 5 mins tops to see the whole map and watch the cenimatic. it won't take much time at all. just d/l it please. and if it takes too much of your precious time than you can shoot me.

edit: improved version added. anyone care to rate it again?

Nice job, man. It could be slightly better, thought. Here are som tips.

Number one:

Make the tileset with more... let's say... combining terrain types. Those jus't don't look good together. It's also good to have DIRT style terrain types at the beggining of the list.

Numbeer two:

Terrain variation. It's too... DIRT

Number three:

Doodads, Don't use them to cover a large area. It's good to use them, but using cliffs among the doodads makes it more interesting and visual.

Number four:
Your peaks, well, look like a couple of cones. Make somo noise on them, and then smooth!

That's all I can think of at the time. Keep on the good work.

yea i was wonderign how i could make the peaks look better. i didn't think they looked right either but thank you for helping me on how to improve it. i'll go mess with it some more. actually when i released this i wanted to have skins on units also to have those rated and as you can see if you look closely the shadow hunter is skinned a little bit. all i did was draw some tatoos on his chest but that was just a test to make sure i knew how to import it. thanx keep the advice coming.

updated version up anyone wanna re rate this map?