| 11-20-2003, 05:09 PM | #1 |
Hello. Out of boredom I decided to make a small medium-quality campaign. Mainly because all others I played yet really sucked. It is mainly about a paladin, that turns into death knight, but wants his old love back.. I plan to make lots of dialogs between the different undead heroes I will use.. well whatever. Here is the small intro I made. I don't need any critism. It still has 2 minor bugs I just cannot fix for some reason. And I was using no music or sound effects (i usually listen to mp3s all the time.. cough). If someone is watching it, I still wouldnt mind if u tell me bout the bad english. Its only my second language and i used lots of dialogs. Well, enjoy or not. EDIT: I fixed the bug when tara dies, fixed position of the lich at the end, now all those dead guys in the battle dont get corpses and decay, fixed a small typo and added music. New attachment: |
| 11-21-2003, 06:57 PM | #2 |
hey.. its pretty good. id just add more camera angles. make the camera closer up the person when they talk or something.... whatever the terrain in the beginning was... okay... wasnt in total awe or anything, but it was decent... start the cinematic by fading over 0 seconds. that way the cinema. starts from pitch black, and then fade in. its not too good to just start w/ a view of trees, then fade to black, then have the intro eeehh.. you went a bit excessive on the trees.. it might have just been my comp or something(grrr.. took out the nvidia 4 card...) but it lagged a bit for me.. i liked the timing of the script.. it was dead on. not too bad of a dialogue since english its your second language. id only fix minor parts to it.. but it worked overall... i liked it. i did a slow mo. death thing before. sorta like your tara one.. but i did it w/ an archer and had her get blasted back. gj :D :D |
| 11-21-2003, 09:10 PM | #3 |
Thanks for the reply^^ Yea, I make all my maps with heavy doodad use. this time i didnt went into detail, but everybody told me it lags and im going to remove grass and trees (insane numbers used for both). With normal camera angle, it isnt lagging at all in my other maps >_<. Ok, im going to fix that fade in the beginning. Hmmm blasting her back sounds cool. Maybe I should make the map cinematic only, it was fun >_< but im not in the mood of trying to make awesome stuff like everyone else in this forum. "i liked the timing of the script.. it was dead on." <--- i didnt get that :/ Thank you :-) |