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11-27-2003, 10:54 PM#1
LIAHONA
I'm really getting in the mood to make a small campaign. Not sure if it's going to b a mod or cinematic but i'll see.

I only have a few random ideas floating in my head right now. I'm not sure what i want to call it. What i do have is some concept art of one of my main characters, a sig with the main quote(name of story will go on the bottom when i think of one) and some skins.
Here are some ideas of the story:
Start of on the out skirts of an Elvish nation(outside WC3 universe) as a young mage in training. His ame is Zephon(subject to change) and his teacher is his father whom is the leader of a magic council. The elves have been in a terrotorial battle with orcs for decades now and zephron and his father are sent to destroy them. Here you learn some names, locations, just basic things.
More building up to the best part:
The orcs are being guided by 2 leaders. A Orc Warlock(name?) and a Ancient DreadLord(name?). They of course dont like to share power, but they throw their petty disputes aside to serve their "god"(strong divine being that gives them orders whom they believe to be a god). As Zephon and his father attack the orc fortress the Drealord charges with his units and this big battle takes place. Somehow the orc warlock increases in strength(i'm thinking he was posessed by his "god") and hits the dreadlord with a powerful bolt or lightning. Assuming he's dead he moves on to The elves taking them out easily. He cofronts Zephon and his father and a big batlle begins. Zephon's father, though fighting with all his might knows he cannot win, so he teleports his son away and meets his doom at the hands of the Warlock.
Now finally this is where the story gets intresting:
Zephon being teleported away, tired and sadend by his loss hears a voice. He listens for a while and then notices the voice is coming from a large being. The Dreadlord, badly bleeding and burned, tells the young elf that they share a common enemy, and that only together will they reap the satisfaction of Vengence. The mage agrees and the DreadLord chants his most powerful spell, the ability to merge his soul with another and hence become one. Two beings died that night and gave birth to a god.

Remember, this is just a ruff draft of the story, huge changes can still take place. The story is going to have lots of plot twists and who's doing what in it. To keep people wondering.

What do you think so far, good idea
11-28-2003, 01:38 AM#2
Whitehorn
Nice story, but how are you going to make it ino a campiagn with god vs god?
11-28-2003, 01:50 AM#3
faxmaster
Well, thats one of the better storys i've read for a mod, despite its roughness. It has a lot of potentialand it would be nice to see somthing come out of it. If you need any modeling help, I'd be glad to lend my hand. (I like the quote on your sig btw- is it original?)
11-28-2003, 07:25 AM#4
LIAHONA
WhiteHorn:
It's not exactly a god Vs. god. The orc warlock was possesed by a being he believed was a god. And i guess i over did it with the mage and dread lord, i meant god like. He now fused with the dread lord will have to lvl up and "evolve". It will be like a Cenarius Vs. Archimond battle but with more fire works.

faxmaster:
Thanks, good to know i got modeling help. The quote on my sig is actually from the Bible.
Matthew 10:34

This whole story came from an idea i had of a BloodMage and DreadLord fusing together as one. Over time the BloodMage would start showing features of a DreadLord. At first he would have pale skin and wearing dreadlord armor. next chapter or whatever he would have small horns and claws, last he would have the wings, black markings around his eyes(like tichondrias) and a tail. When i find a darn scanner my pics will explain it better than my words.
11-28-2003, 09:21 AM#5
Gerundok
sounds like you have got a fair bit planned, you will need a modeler to do the Bloodmage+Dreadlord[how about you call him Bloodlord? or Chaos wielder, as in the hero-class, not the name], hope you can find someone to help, once ive fixed my modeling program problem, i could create a model looking like the Bloodlord\Chaos Wielder[first one sounds heaps cool!], im pretty good at editing, i could do the model, but it wouldn't save, i could give a pic in wireframe mod, from top, bottom, left, right, front and back, reply here or PM with your answer, and if you wish to talk more, AIM me, my nick there is Gerundok


EDIT: heres a name you could give the mod: Vengeance - The Fine Line, not very good, mind has been dead for a long while, and only today has it started sparking with ideas.
11-28-2003, 10:57 AM#6
LIAHONA
I like your ideas Razor, BloodLord....simple enough but i like it. I'll see. Vengence for the name sounds kind of simple but it's really good to start off with. It would be great to have you give me some of your ideas for how Zephron should look. All i got are the pictures in my head and on paper. Any help you can give me whether it be models or even just ideas i would really appreciate it.
My AIM is Spoonfish797
Ithink i'll be going to kinko's tomorrow so i'll get my pics up here real soon.
11-28-2003, 03:18 PM#7
faxmaster
Quote:
Originally posted by The_Kid

faxmaster:
Thanks, good to know i got modeling help. The quote on my sig is actually from the Bible.
Matthew 10:34


Augh! I knew after I asked if it was original it would be from some hugely popular source- like the bible. Pardon my stupidity. Oh, pm me if you want any help with modeling.
11-28-2003, 09:58 PM#8
Gerundok
i forgot to post some previous work, but i will now.

http://server4.uploadit.org/files/28...ragonRider.jpg
http://www.uploadit.org/files2/171103-Tauren-Hunter.jpg
http://server3.uploadit.org/files/16...-new-newer.jpg
http://server3.uploadit.org/files/16...ren-Worker.jpg
http://server4.uploadit.org/files/281103-Gerundok.jpg

the 2nd and 4th images are of the same model, one without spear and a tad skinnier, and once with spear and a little bit fatter

i am yet to upload the Mythirad dude or Gerundok, they need anims and skins before uploading
11-30-2003, 08:50 PM#9
LIAHONA
Those look real impressive. If your up to it i'll have a request for you soon Razor. You too faxmaster.

facts i forgot to mention in the first post:
-Zephon has a twin sister. Their father fearing future disputes over who controls what had both of them joined by magic mentally and physically so that they would never go against each other.
-Zephon and the Ancient DreadLord share Zephons body. Both individuals are still intact in one mind. Zephon can hear the voice of the dread lord in his head and the dreadlord at times can take control of Zephons body and hear his voice.(make sense?)
-My story orcs where sent to several dimensions to invade several worlds.
-While the Ancient DL was a partner with the warlock he had his own nathrezim soldiers with him who where all killed when he was betrayed.

I just thought of this.
After the joining Zephon falls into a deep sleep. When he awakes he learns that his beloved kingdom is falling in ruin at the hands of the orcs. He meets up with his sister(name? modified Jania skin) and the Ranger general whom he has a thing for(name? modified sylvannas) and fights with him. The orcs prove to be to strong and too many and they quickly over take the forest. Zephon's lover (ranger) is killed and Zephon see's his sister taken away. He then evacuates the last of his kin and leaves his home. (this is still just a basic cover, so it sounds dull)
Idea 1:
Finding a Island not to far off into the sea the elves sart to build their new home. Zephon's mind is flooded with thoughts of revenge as his blood runs through his veins like liquid fire. He then realizes the only way to make his people strong enough to face the orcs was to pass on his dark gift. Soon he has a whole army of his vampiric children, so he attacks. With the elves new found powers they out manuever the orcs and regain ther lands. Zephon's thirst for orc blood is still not satisfied, being that the old orc warlock has still evaded his wrath. His army soon picks up the trail and they find him in a tomb deep underground. The warlock had open'ed a dimensional gate andwas preparing to leave.

old warlock:"Good to see you again (Ancient dread lords name), i see you too have found a suitable host and built some empire for yourself. I must say i'm quite impressed."

Ancient Dreadlord takes control of Zephon

Ancient DL:"the chase ends here (warlocks name), you will die for your betrayel."
Old warlock:"you vampire fool, you have no idea what your up against! I only required a body, I........no this is the end. I have no further use for this world, what i need now lies in a different land. You and your kin can rot here for all i care, (line? something cool?)."

Old warlock then summons some demons and leaves through the portal. Zephon fights his way through and leaves his bretheren to fight. As he begin to walk through the portal the ground trembles and Zephon is pushed in. as he emerges on the otherside the portal is destroyed. Zephon gets up and observes his surroundigs, he notices he's in a canyon. As he walks through the the rocks and rubble he confronts a group of orcs.

1st Orc:"Dont you move Demon!"
2nd Orc:"Should we take him to Grom?"
1st Orc:"NO! my axe has grown rust since our last battle. His blood should do well to clean it!"

Zephon seeing only the site of orcs pulls out his sword

Zephon:"You orcs never learn, that you and the fate of your race lies at the end of my blade!"
11-30-2003, 08:59 PM#10
Cloud_2041_
Wow nice idea..this beats any of my ideas anyways if you need a basic trigger person IM Me on Aim My aim name is DTMarine247 or Pm Me or post here
11-30-2003, 09:02 PM#11
LIAHONA
Thanks alot. Triggers are a real pain. I might not call on you for a while though. i'm just writing right now but i'll keep you in mind.