You might want to put a few plant doodads by the forest edge, as well as giving the ground some height variation and perhaps more than one ground texture?
Also, you might want to change the spoken line to
"Damn it! Captain, wait here while I gather the other elves so we can set off."
or something similar. Punctuation is a good thing.
Other than this, it looks pretty good.
Oh, one last thing: What is the difference between the first and the last screen shot? | 
