Someone tell me if this is a good first map!

Its not finished but plz tell me if it is so far

You have no map attached.

OOPS forgot the map!!

Um, just asking people to DL your map is really pushing your luck. Try telling us a bit about it, and if you have time some screenies too!

You pick from 7 heros and defend a town called shallows. Not all the triggers are done and the items need to be customized. this is just the rought draft.

All right, I tried it out and I guess I'll give it a rating.

As a first map, I guess it's not too bad: You even manage to use a few triggers. However, you'll have to work quite a bit on your mapping before releasing anything and expecing people to actually play it.

Here's the rating I'd give it if it was released as anything else than a 'first map'.


Storyline: 0/10. There is no story.
Terrain: 1/10. Flat and green. And a few houses. Gets one point for not messing up the walls.
Units: 0/10. Renamed units. Renamed heroes and changed their models. There are even two identical ones with different names!
True to Source: 0/10. You got the names right. Still... Wulfgar, with the abilities of a paladin? Guenhwyvar, the... beast master?!? And worst of all: Once he uses metamorphosis, Drizzt permanently changes his name to... Illidan!
Gameplay: 0/10. Orcs appear and run towards town. Whee. Also see Balance.
Text/Spelling: 2/10. No major spelling errors, but you managed to get the text on the loading screen messed up.
Balance: 0/10. Cheap tomes. That says it all.
Custom Content/Abilities: 0/10. Nope.
Personal Tilt: 0/20. Nope, I don't like it. Not one bit.

Total: 3/100. :( .

ROUGH DRAFT I HAVENT EDITED THE SPELLS YET, I TOLD U THAT,AND I HAVENT ADDED TERRAIN YET, I ALSO TOLD U THAT!!!!
but thx

BulletCatcher, you added wrong he got a 4/100 ;) . And Twin_Scimitars why did you flame him, he gave you constructive critzim.

-Peace ez

If you're going to lie, you should consider doing it in a more believable way.

Originally posted by Twin_Scimitars:

Actually, you told me nothing about the spells not being edited or the terrain not having been added: All you said was that the triggers were not finished and that the items were not customized, so I refrained from even rating those things. (Balance would have gotten that '0' even without tomes)

ur right im sry and phreak i said thx to him

No you basically said "THANKS FOR NOTHING BECAUE I DIDN"T DO THE SPELLS YET AND BLAH BLAH BLAH"

Or at least thats how I interpertend it.

U interpereted it wrong i accept the critizicime and i said sry.