Sharpshooter Skin

Hello, this is my first draft of a Sharpshooter. It's entirely from scratch apart from the bow and arrows, and cloak. It's based on the Male Archer model, which I believe is by Whitehorn, but I'm not entirely sure. Does anybody know?

I should have probably attached the picture:

yea it just has that "plain Look" sorry to do a crit (especially one of my team members) but yer it just has that "look"

maybe its just the colours anyway the armour looks ok.

I give it a 4.5/10 (but since there is no 4.5 up there i give it a 5)

Aye, I agree. Don't be sorry for constructive critisizm. I'll put some folds in the clothing, make a large buckle, and make his clothes more elaborate and less plain. and enhance those straps on his mail. Any suggestions?

*cough* SHADING *cough*

the skin is too yellow too.

phoenix, hope u dun cough to death =P

anyways its good in detailling... 7/10(im not cruel!!!), coz u didnt shade enuff... do it and u might get 10/10

Has a very RPG feel to it and I like it just it could use shading :D

7/10 :D

some more details won´t be wrong...

but nice anyway 6/10

it's pretty good, and i'm not saying i could do better, but it really could use shading :)

6/10 :)

It may not be that good, but I still want it for use as a male archer unit in my map, so 7/10.

I'd considered that a rough layout for a skin, like just coloring different parts of the skin so you know roughly what it's gonna look like. Now is where you're gonna want to add details, like straps, buttons, buckles, stuff like that, and most importantly, *SHADE* the damn thing. Right now it looks about as 3D as your avatar ^^

Still, nice design. Even something as simple as a quick Dodge & Burn - session would make it totally acceptable.

I sense a lot of free hand on the skin so it shows that you managed to do your work 7/10 :D KIU :foot:

5.5/10 I put 6 tho. It needs shading and a more unique look. At least its not a recolor :foot:

Thanks for the constructive critisizm, everyone! I'll go and work on my second draft. And was it Whitehorn who made the model? I need to know who to give credit to.

i think some1 else made the model whitehorn just skinned it (well i could be wrong)