| 12-14-2003, 12:42 AM | #1 |
ive been fooling around with Fruity Loops today and made a couple songs from scratch. Heres what i made: Tundra- 2:00.1 Genre: Electronic somthin or other You are walking through an icy, artic land. The wind swirls the snow which rises in thin white wisps contrasting the dark, cold night. After several hours the sky begins to lighten and you crest a hill to see a beautiful sunrise. The sun warms your face and chilled bones as it spreads its glorious rays. heh, yah theres the story. now give it a listen. :D feedback is appreciated. |
| 12-14-2003, 03:37 AM | #2 |
Good, but too techno, try making an acoustic version of it using the instruments they had back then. |
| 12-14-2003, 02:00 PM | #3 |
Heres another one. I started it but never found the time to finish. Vega- 1:00 Genre: Electronic hmm story...The sun beats down on the golden desert sand. Heat waves rise, shimmering on the horizon. You are running. Sweat drops from every pore on your body but you must keep going. imo Tundra was better, but this is still kinda cool. |
| 12-14-2003, 02:01 PM | #4 |
forgot to attatch |
| 12-15-2003, 10:19 PM | #5 |
Oohh I like the Tundra thing nicely. It could just use a bit mroe varation, but the quality is very nice. There is a certain buildup in there, it is ok, but I usually don't really go with the buildup of layering more and more stuff on top of each other. The second one is indeed not done :) I suggest you enter the composer comp for this month ;) |