Some help here.....

Allright this is a draw i made(sorry but my scaner is broken so i took a photo with a digital camera) for a hero....i still don't have a name for it so please say your ideas....(And.......my english is not that good either)
Elven _ _ _ _ _(Give him a name)
(Well you can help me to choose a story too....... :foot: )
1:
After Lord Illidan's defeat at Icecrown, the blood elves were surrounded by the undead scourge, and the ranks of their Naga allies were either scaping or dying in an effort to survive......., The Blood Elves were in terrible despair.......... It was then when this mighty warriors appeared, from the higher ranks of the Priests this highly skilled blood elves have learned the magics of the blood mages combining them with the powers of the priests and ,because of the hostile enviroment, they have learned
to wield swords as well.Imbuing their weapons with magical powers
this blood elves still hope to save their people from the slaughtering of the scourge.....
2:
Allthough most of the blood elves went to outland with Prince Kael'Thas, some of them remained behind in Dalaran and were captured by the humans.....but after Grand Marshall Garithos death the humans let the elves free to aid them against the newly appeared Forsaken............
this mighty warriors appear, from the higher ranks of the Priests this highly skilled blood elves have learned the magics of the blood mages combining them with the powers of the priests and ,because of the hostile enviroment, they have learned
to wield swords as well.Imbuing their weapons with magical powers
this blood elves fight restlessly to hold againts the Forsaken but they also fight to cease their people hunger for magic and to find their beloved Prince Kael'Thas...............

Primary Atributte: Agility
Abilities:
Fire Sword: Imbues his sword with fire causing greater damage to their enemies and making them to take damage over time
Lv1-+25 dmg, minor damage over time- 40 mana
Lv2-+45 dmg, moderate damage over time-60 mana
Lv3-+80 dmg, major damage over time-100 mana
Blinding Light: The Hero throws a light so strong that makes nearby enemy units have a chance to miss an attack.
Lv1-15% chance to miss the attack-20 mana
Lv2-30% chance to miss the attack- 40 mana
Lv3-50% chance to miss the attack- 60 mana
Aura of Light: Causes nearby friendly living units to gain hp and deal half damage to undead enemy units
Lv1-Friendly units gain 1/2 hp per second.
Lv2-Friendly units gain 1 hp per second
Lv3-Friendly units gain 2 hp per second
Fire Of Purification(Ultimate):The Hero Causes an powerfull explosion of fire and light that makes nearby enemy units lose 350 hp dispelling all magic in the area-Deals +200 dmg to summoned units- 150 mana

You can help me with the abilities also.Some constructive criticism may be good.........Please do not come and say"w00t your idea scks"

You may live... oh, and name 'em MR. Smilie ;)

Hmmm... To me it actually looks really good, but I still see some flaws:

The sword looks a little to dull, and the hand holding it needs more work at the thumb-area and the highest finger.

His backside doesn't show at his right. Maybe it isn't supposed to but I would consider putting in some armor to show its there. Now it looks like hes stomach is just made of armor.

The right hand also looks a little weird, just cant point it out.

Left leg is a couple of millimeter to thin.

Take a look at the left shoulderpad, It needs a little more work...

...and FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, GIVE HIM SOME PANTS!!!

Besides that, GOOD JOB! :D (I like the eyes especially much.)

What????



Thanks for all the comments........but it actually have pants , you may not notice because it is not painted or because i didn't add much detail..........

hmm... i think the head looks really cool, its very well drawn from the chest area up, but below (hands, waist, legs, sword) it starts to look flat and awkward.

Yeah..... i kinda rushed in that parts.......

its good but the papaer u used looked like see throguh paper , did u traced it?? but if u didint its really looks goood! but the waist legs and sword is weird;)

I agree with NOS, fix the legs. The rest is in perfect perfection. :D

Thanks.......it has been a long time since the last time i actually drawed something....

Lol! I said perfetc perfection! Silly me, I meant perfect PORTION.

It's really good, I love the style! :D

dont you mean perfect proportion? ://// :ggani:

I bestow upon thee the legendary Krishna, for use by your hero.



As for name, I have one that would suit him well: Witch Hunter.

I can also assist with his spells. I'll see what I can do tomorrow.

Hey! Thanks! That will be useful!!:foot: